[Cdd-commits] r434 - cdd/trunk/doc/en
CDD Subversion Commit
noreply at alioth.debian.org
Thu Nov 30 20:46:59 CET 2006
Author: tille
Date: Thu Nov 30 20:46:59 2006
New Revision: 434
Modified:
cdd/trunk/doc/en/08_todo.sgml
Log:
Spelling corrections
Modified: cdd/trunk/doc/en/08_todo.sgml
==============================================================================
--- cdd/trunk/doc/en/08_todo.sgml (original)
+++ cdd/trunk/doc/en/08_todo.sgml Thu Nov 30 20:46:59 2006
@@ -48,13 +48,13 @@
| |
| +- tags
| |
- | +- trunk [developmen version of Debian-Jr]
+ | +- trunk [development version of Debian-Jr]
|
+- med ----+- branches
| |
| +- tags
| |
- | +- trunk [developmen version of Debian-Med]
+ | +- trunk [development version of Debian-Med]
|
+- ...
|
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
<file>debian-cdd.pot</file>. Translators of the web pages should
update their <file>.po</file> files and translate this new file into
their language. For the translation teams who have already begun to
-translate the webpages of the Debian-Med Custom Debian Distribution,
+translate the web pages of the Debian-Med Custom Debian Distribution,
here is a short explanation of the newly introduced tag and its use.
The tag is called <tt>project</tt>, and it takes a few attributes. The
complete (empty) tag looks like this:
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
this is not wanted, the id and name of the anchor can be
specified with this attribute. An example of the use of this
attribute can be found in other.wml. The project's name is
- "HARP - HArmonization for the secuRity of web technologies
+ "HARP - HArmonisation for the secuRity of web technologies
and aPplications", which is awfully long. The anchorid
attribute in this case is set to "harp". Note that you should
never have to change anything here, if it is already defined
@@ -238,13 +238,13 @@
<item>Top most you should list all packages which are just inside
Debian and thus (hopefully) included in the meta package
dependencies. This should be followed by the projects which
- has inofficial packages outside Debian. A last group should
+ has unofficial packages outside Debian. A last group should
list all not yet packaged projects which are interesting for
the Custom Debian Distribution. These groups are using a
certain green-yellow-red color code.
</item>
<tag>alphabetically</tag>
- <item>Inside each of these three groups an alphabethical order is
+ <item>Inside each of these three groups an alphabetical order is
proposed to gain some consistency between all Custom Debian
Distributions.
</item>
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
</p>
</sect1>
<sect1 id="graphingwebpages">
- <heading>Automatically graphing the metapackage depandencies for web
+ <heading>Automatically graphing the meta-package dependencies for web
pages</heading>
<p>
The new <package>cddtk</package> contains a tool which allows browsing
@@ -265,9 +265,9 @@
pkgtool -p UNCOMPRESSED_PACKAGES_FILE pdeps LIST_OF_PACKAGE_NAMES
</example>
-This could be used as a start to build the webpages as suggested above
+This could be used as a start to build the web-pages as suggested above
automatically - at least for the packages which are just at the
-Debian-Mirror. For the inofficial packages and not yet existing
+Debian-Mirror. For the unofficial packages and not yet existing
packages a fake-<file>Packages</file> following the same syntax could
be created and processed with the same tool.
</p>
@@ -285,12 +285,12 @@
be used.
</p>
<p>
-However, the system has evolved so that tags are organized in
-"facets", which are separate ontologies used to categorize the
+However, the system has evolved so that tags are organised in
+"facets", which are separate ontologies used to categorise the
packages under different points of view.
</p>
<p>
-This means that the new categorization system supports tagging
+This means that the new categorisation system supports tagging
different facets of packages. There can be a set of tags for the
"purpose" of a package (like "chatting", "searching", "editing"),
a set of tags for the technologies used by a package (like "html",
@@ -298,9 +298,9 @@
</p>
<p>
Besides being able to perform package selection more efficiently by
-being able to use a better categorization, one of the first outcomes
+being able to use a better categorisation, one of the first outcomes
of Debian Package Tags for CDDs is that every CDD could maintain its
-own set of tags organized under a "facet", providing categorization
+own set of tags organised under a "facet", providing categorisation
data which could be used by its users and which automatically
interrelates with the rest of the tags.
</p>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
<p>
It is not excluded that this could evolve in being able to create a
Custom Debian Distribution just by selecting all packages tagged by
-"edu::*" tags, plus dependancies; however, this option is still being
+"edu::*" tags, plus dependencies; however, this option is still being
investigated.
</p>
<p>
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
<p>
Last but not least the special configuration issue has to be
addressed. In general developers of meta packages should provide
-patches for dependend packages if they need a certain configuration
+patches for dependent packages if they need a certain configuration
option and the package in question does feature a
<prgn>debconf</prgn> configuration for this case. Then the
meta package could provide the needed options by pre-seeding the
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@
<item>Knoppix for Children - connected to Debian-Jr.</item>
<tag><url id="http://dirk.eddelbuettel.com/quantian.html"
name="Quantian"></tag>
- <item>Remastered "ClusterKnoppix" for the needs of Mathematicians</item>
+ <item>Re-mastered "ClusterKnoppix" for the needs of Mathematicians</item>
<tag><url
id="http://sourceforge.net/project/showfiles.php?group_id=9295"
name="LiveOIO">
@@ -503,13 +503,13 @@
<tag>Similar projects</tag>
<item>In the past there was some confusion about of the goals of
Live-CD building projects. Even at the Debian development
- plattform <url id="alioth.debian.org"> do some similar
+ platform <url id="alioth.debian.org"> do some similar
projects exist.
<taglist>
<tag><url id="http://alioth.debian.org/projects/debix/"
name="Debix">
<item><p>Debix is a collection of scripts to create live
- filesystems ranging from cloning any existing linux
+ filesystems ranging from cloning any existing Linux
system, providing a comfortable environment for the
boot-floppies and debian installer up to a full blown
live filesystem comparable with Knoppix.</p>
@@ -518,23 +518,23 @@
asked about his goals he answered: "Debix is a level
below knoppix I would say. If you handle the knoppix
debs and scripts you could use debix to make seemingly
- writeable cd images out of a tar.gz or a directory
+ writable cd images out of a tar.gz or a directory
containing the knoppix tree."
</p>
<p>Debix is more than one thing:
<enumlist>
- <item>A tool to make a live-cd out of any linux system.</item>
- <item>Premade sets of package lists and configuration and patches to
+ <item>A tool to make a live-cd out of any Linux system.</item>
+ <item>Pre-made sets of package lists and configuration and patches to
automatically create nice live-cds like knoppix.</item>
</enumlist>
- In cvs (on alioth) is a version of Debix that can be
+ In cvs (on Alioth) is a version of Debix that can be
called "proof of concept" of part 1. Work is in
progress of changing the build scripts to be modular
and flexible so part 2 can be started.
</p>
<p>Debix can provide the infrastructure. Knoppix has to
supply the debs that should be in a Knoppix set for
- debix. The 2 parts mean that Debix is suposed as tool
+ debix. The 2 parts mean that Debix is supposed as tool
to create a live-cd from an existing or hand build
system but also a tool that can build such system
automatically according to preset rules (list of debs
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@
</item>
<tag><url id="http://alioth.debian.org/projects/metadistros/" name="Metadistros">
<item><p>Debian Metadistros goal is to allow you easily
- remastering Live-CD distributions like Knoppix to fit
+ re-mastering Live-CD distributions like Knoppix to fit
your or you users needs, within Debian.</p>
<p>It is a little bit hard to get information about
this project, because most of the information is in
@@ -551,25 +551,25 @@
<p>One piece of the docs which Sergio Talens-Oliag
<email>sto at debian.org</email> has kindly translated
says: "... the main problem is that Debian wants a
- Debian tool to make its own LiveCDs but Metadistros
+ Debian tool to make its own Live-CDs but Metadistros
wants to give tools to let anyone create a
- distribution that can be used as LiveCD and/or
- installed and be based in whatever linux
+ distribution that can be used as Live-CD and/or
+ installed and be based in whatever Linux
distribution the user wants. Anyway, he said that
if they can cooperate in any way they will be happy
to do it."
</p>
</item>
<tag><url id="http://www.morphix.org/" name="Morphix">
- <item><p>Morphix is a modular GNU/Linux distribution on livecd's
- (you burn the CD, you put it in your CD-Rom drive, you
+ <item><p>Morphix is a modular GNU/Linux distribution on live-Cd's
+ (you burn the CD, you put it in your CD-ROM drive, you
boot and it works... no harddisk-installation
necessary, doesn't touch your data). Also, installing
Morphix on a harddisk is a breeze, if you want to. Just
click on the icon on the desktop, or choose the
- installer from the morphix/babytux submenu. Morphix
+ installer from the Morphix/babytux submenu. Morphix
should still be considered experimental in nature. No
- guarentees are given, use Morphix at your own risk!</p>
+ guarantees are given, use Morphix at your own risk!</p>
<p>
ISO's with XFCE4, Gnome2.4, KDE3.1, a game iso and a
large number of derivatives are available. Morphix is an Open
@@ -578,20 +578,20 @@
</item>
<tag><url id="http://ibuild.livecd.net/howto.en.php" name="Intellibuild">
<item><p>Intellibuild (iBuild) is a set of python scripts
- designed to make the creation/remaster of a Morphix or
- Knoppix LiveCD very simple and easy to do. You can
+ designed to make the creation/re-master of a Morphix or
+ Knoppix Live-CD very simple and easy to do. You can
easily modify changes and test them without having to
- remember all of the syntax of the remastering
+ remember all of the syntax of the re-mastering
commands.</p>
- <p>The idea is to be able to write xml file that would
+ <p>The idea is to be able to write XML file that would
call python scripts that install debian packages and
- costumize system for you. It is still under heavy
- development but Slo-Tech Linux and GNUSTEP livecd
+ customise system for you. It is still under heavy
+ development but Slo-Tech Linux and GNUSTEP Live-CD
already use it.</p>
<p>Currently work is done to build a GUI that will
allow you select modules via scripts. It's currently
- morphix based even though it could be easily tuned for
- knoppix or any other debian approaches to livecds.
+ Morphix based even though it could be easily tuned for
+ knoppix or any other debian approaches to Live-CDs.
</p>
</item>
</taglist>
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