[Collab-qa-commits] r956 - udd/web

Mon Jul 28 14:40:34 UTC 2008

Author: lucas
Date: 2008-07-28 14:40:31 +0000 (Mon, 28 Jul 2008)
New Revision: 956

Modified:
   udd/web/index.html
Log:
slightly reworked working of index.html

Modified: udd/web/index.html
===================================================================

--- udd/web/index.html	2008-07-28 14:28:33 UTC (rev 955)
+++ udd/web/index.html	2008-07-28 14:40:31 UTC (rev 956)
@@ -1,15 +1,14 @@
 <html>
   <title>
-    The Ultimate Debian Database Example Queries
+     Ultimate Debian Database (UDD) - Example Queries
   </title>
   <body>
     <h1>
-      The Ultimate Debian Database (UDD) example queries
+      Ultimate Debian Database (UDD) - Example Queries
     </h1>
 
     <p>
-    To provide you with an idea what results UDD can deliver,
-    I will link some example queries from here
+    To give you an idea what results UDD can deliver, here are some example queries:
     </p>
 
     <p>


