[D-community-discuss] Draft for an announce about debian-community.org

[Andrei Popescu]

On Sat, Dec 15, 2007 at 10:10:54PM +0100, Shams Fantar wrote:

I hope you don't mind a few suggestions:

> Debian-community, a community for debian users !
> 
> Created and set up on 22 January 2007 by a debian developer[0], 
> debian-community.org[1] is a website which has for purpose to promote 

... the purpose of promoting ...

> the debian[2] distribution by different services.

... by offering different services:

> In order to do this, here are the different services :

[this sentence is not needed anymore]

> - D-c (=Debian-community) makes available different planets (which are 
... provides ---------------^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

> not official) for many languages, you can ask (via the mailing list 
[full stop] ---------------------^^^

> for example...) the setting up for a planet. Knowing it exists three 
... of a planet. There already exist three ... 

> planets on debian-community, one in Italian, one in English, one in 
and --------------------------------------------------------^^^

> German. Of course, there are always the official debian planets, their 
> list is available here[3].
> 
> - A FAQ for debian etch exists[4], there are only many questions with 
did you mean 'few'? --------------------------------^^^^

> their reponse(s) for the moment, the FAQ waits for yourself to 
--^^^^^ [not needed] -----------^^^ [maybe a semi-colon? (;)]
> complete it !
> 
> - A mailing list[5] for discussions has been setting up for everybody.
set -------------------------------------------^^^^^^^


> Many people have had ideas to improve the debian-community website and 
> services :
> 
> - Make debian-community t-shirts for contributors !
> 
> - Provide a jabber and mail service for every contributor.
> 
> - You can also promote your project if you want on this webpage[6] !
> 
> To thanks contributors, we have created a page[7], don't forget to add 
no 's' --^^^

> yourself ! You will be able as well to watch two videos (but in two 
... will also be able to ... ------------------------------^^^ (not 
necessary)

> quality for each video) about debian-community at DebConf7 in high 
... qualities(?) [this doesn't sound very well, maybe you could remove 
the sentence altogether? You are mentioning that in the next phrase.]

> quality[8] and in low quality[9], and at FOSDEM 2007 in high 
> quality[10] and in low quality[11]. Your contributions are welcome !  
> If you don't know what to do, you will find a TodoList[12].

[maybe the 'in high and in low quality' should be in brackets.]

Regards,
Andrei
-- 
If you can't explain it simply, you don't understand it well enough.
(Albert Einstein)
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