[d-i-commits] r32143 - in trunk/manual: fi/install-methods fi/install-methods/usb-setup nl/install-methods nl/install-methods/usb-setup

[Frans Pop]

Author: fjp
Date: 2005-11-15 23:00:32 +0000 (Tue, 15 Nov 2005)
New Revision: 32143

Modified:
   trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml
   trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml
   trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml
   trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml
Log:
Update of original English docs

Modified: trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml	2005-11-15 22:59:06 UTC (rev 32142)
+++ trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml	2005-11-15 23:00:32 UTC (rev 32143)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
-<!-- original version: 25496 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 32124 untranslated -->
 
  <sect1 condition="bootable-usb" id="boot-usb-files">
  <title>Preparing Files for USB Memory Stick Booting</title>
@@ -34,9 +34,6 @@
 # zcat boot.img.gz &gt; /dev/<replaceable>sda</replaceable>
 </screen></informalexample>
 
-Of course this will destroy anything already on the device, so take
-care that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
-
 </para><para arch="powerpc">
 
 There is an all-in-one file <filename>hd-media/boot.img.gz</filename>
@@ -50,11 +47,15 @@
 # zcat boot.img.gz &gt; /dev/<replaceable>sda2</replaceable>
 </screen></informalexample>
 
-Of course this will destroy anything already on the device, so take
-care that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
+</para>
+<warning><para>
 
-</para><para>
+Using this method will destroy anything already on the device. Make sure
+that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
 
+</para></warning>
+<para>
+
 After that, mount the USB memory stick (<userinput>mount
 <replaceable arch="i386">/dev/sda</replaceable>
 <replaceable arch="powerpc">/dev/sda2</replaceable>

Modified: trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml	2005-11-15 22:59:06 UTC (rev 32142)
+++ trunk/manual/fi/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml	2005-11-15 23:00:32 UTC (rev 32143)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
-<!-- original version: 27345 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 32141 untranslated -->
 
    <sect3 arch="i386">
    <title>USB stick partitioning on &arch-title;</title>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 
 <informalexample><screen>
 default vmlinuz
-append initrd=initrd.gz ramdisk_size=12000 root=/dev/rd/0 init=/linuxrc rw
+append initrd=initrd.gz ramdisk_size=12000 root=/dev/ram rw
 </screen></informalexample>
 
 Please note that the <userinput>ramdisk_size</userinput> parameter

Modified: trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml	2005-11-15 22:59:06 UTC (rev 32142)
+++ trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/boot-usb-files.xml	2005-11-15 23:00:32 UTC (rev 32143)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
-<!-- original version: 25496 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 32124 untranslated -->
 
  <sect1 condition="bootable-usb" id="boot-usb-files">
  <title>Preparing Files for USB Memory Stick Booting</title>
@@ -34,9 +34,6 @@
 # zcat boot.img.gz &gt; /dev/<replaceable>sda</replaceable>
 </screen></informalexample>
 
-Of course this will destroy anything already on the device, so take
-care that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
-
 </para><para arch="powerpc">
 
 There is an all-in-one file <filename>hd-media/boot.img.gz</filename>
@@ -50,11 +47,15 @@
 # zcat boot.img.gz &gt; /dev/<replaceable>sda2</replaceable>
 </screen></informalexample>
 
-Of course this will destroy anything already on the device, so take
-care that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
+</para>
+<warning><para>
 
-</para><para>
+Using this method will destroy anything already on the device. Make sure
+that you use the correct device name for your USB stick.
 
+</para></warning>
+<para>
+
 After that, mount the USB memory stick (<userinput>mount
 <replaceable arch="i386">/dev/sda</replaceable>
 <replaceable arch="powerpc">/dev/sda2</replaceable>

Modified: trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml	2005-11-15 22:59:06 UTC (rev 32142)
+++ trunk/manual/nl/install-methods/usb-setup/i386.xml	2005-11-15 23:00:32 UTC (rev 32143)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking -->
-<!-- original version: 27345 untranslated -->
+<!-- original version: 32141 untranslated -->
 
    <sect3 arch="i386">
    <title>USB stick partitioning on &arch-title;</title>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 
 <informalexample><screen>
 default vmlinuz
-append initrd=initrd.gz ramdisk_size=12000 root=/dev/rd/0 init=/linuxrc rw
+append initrd=initrd.gz ramdisk_size=12000 root=/dev/ram rw
 </screen></informalexample>
 
 Please note that the <userinput>ramdisk_size</userinput> parameter