[Debbits-commit] [debbits] 01/01: added ana's fixes

[Francesca Ciceri]

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commit 6786d93b66b77a1c2142f2760fced10b29141ecb
Author: Francesca Ciceri <madamezou at zouish.org>
Date:   Fri Mar 21 20:26:09 2014 +0100

    added ana's fixes
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 content/2014/dpl-elections-2014.md | 27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2014/dpl-elections-2014.md b/content/2014/dpl-elections-2014.md
index 54d9e2a..3695322 100644
--- a/content/2014/dpl-elections-2014.md
+++ b/content/2014/dpl-elections-2014.md
@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ Slug: dpl-elections-2014
 Author: Francesca Ciceri
 Status: draft
 
-For the Debian Project, it's again that time of the year: [the elections of its
-Project Leader](http://www.debian.org/vote/2014/vote_001).  Starting on March
+It's again that time of the year for the Debian Project: [the elections of its
+Project Leader](http://www.debian.org/vote/2014/vote_001)!  Starting on March
 31st, and during the following two weeks, the Debian Developers will vote to
 choose the person who will guide the project for one year.
 
-Among this year's candidates there is the current DPL, Lucas Nussbaum, who even
-admitting that "*[...]the workload involved in being the DPL is just
-huge[...]*" motivates his nomination with the need for stability in the
+Among this year's candidates there is the current DPL, Lucas Nussbaum, who 
+admits that "*the workload involved in being the DPL is just
+huge,*" and motivates his nomination with the need for stability in the
 project in this release cycle, especially after the difficult decision about
 the default init system.  In [his
 platform](http://www.debian.org/vote/2014/platforms/lucas), Lucas speaks of
@@ -25,18 +25,19 @@ easier collaboration with organizations.
 The only other candidate left after [Gergely Nagy withdrew his
 nomination](https://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2014/03/msg00174.html), is
 former Release Manager Neil McGovern.  [Neil's
-platform](http://www.debian.org/vote/2014/platforms/neilm) focus mainly on the
-need to "*[...] ensure that we cater to our users, and there's millions of
+platform](http://www.debian.org/vote/2014/platforms/neilm) focuses mainly on the
+need to "*ensure that we cater to our users, and there's millions of
 them. From those running the latest software in unstable, to people who simply
-want a rock solid core release [...]*", in his opinion "*the size of
+want a rock solid core release.*" In his opinion "*the size of
 Debian is increasing, and will reach a point where we're unable to guarantee
 basic compatibility with other packages, or the length of time it takes to do
-so becomes exponentially longer, unless something changes*".  To fix this
-problem, Neil proposes the implementation of PPA ([Personal Package
-Archive](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Personal_Package_Archive)), the
+so becomes exponentially longer, unless something changes*." To fix this
+problem, Neil proposes the implementation of PPAs ([Personal Package
+Archives](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Personal_Package_Archive)), the
 modernisation of the current build and infrastructure system as well as
-generally support the various teams.
+generally supporting the various teams.
 
 The campaigning period will last until March 30th: the candidates are already
 engaged in debates and discussions on the [debian-vote mailing
-list](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/) where they'll reply to answers users and contributors.
+list](http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/) where they'll reply to questions from
+users and contributors.

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