[Debbits-commit] [debbits] 01/01: Some rewording thanks to Martin Michlmayr

[Laura Arjona Reina]

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commit 8490390ea29c3f87641a4f3b0cf34a670eb35d20
Author: Laura Arjona Reina <larjona at larjona.net>
Date:   Mon Mar 23 22:15:32 2015 +0100

    Some rewording thanks to Martin Michlmayr
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 content/2015/hp-platinum-dc15.md | 8 +++++---
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/2015/hp-platinum-dc15.md b/content/2015/hp-platinum-dc15.md
index e6a8db9..0cf8873 100644
--- a/content/2015/hp-platinum-dc15.md
+++ b/content/2015/hp-platinum-dc15.md
@@ -7,10 +7,12 @@ Status: draft
 
 [![HPlogo](|filename|/images/logo_hp.png)](http://www.hp.com/)
 
-We are very pleased to announce that [**Hewlett-Packard (HP)**](http://www.hp.com/) has committed support of DebConf15 as **Platinum sponsor**.
+We are very pleased to announce that [**HP**](http://www.hp.com/) has committed support of DebConf15 as **Platinum sponsor**.
 
-HP is one of the largest computer companies in the world, providing a wide range of products and services, such as all kinds of
-PCs, calculators, printers, scanners, plotters, various storage products, network servers and equipment, software, etc.
+Hewlett-Packard  is one of the largest computer companies in the
+world, providing a wide range of products and services, such as
+servers, PCs, printers, storage products, network equipment, software,
+cloud computing solutions, etc.
 
 Hewlett-Packard has been a long-term development partner of Debian, and provides hardware for port development, Debian mirrors, and other Debian services
 (HP hardware donations are listed in the [Debian machines](https://db.debian.org/machines.cgi) page).

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