[Debburn-changes] r670 - cdrkit/trunk/debian

[Peter Samuelson]

Author: peters-guest
Date: 2007-01-03 19:32:51 +0100 (Wed, 03 Jan 2007)
New Revision: 670

Modified:
   cdrkit/trunk/debian/control
Log:
debian/control: Editorial changes to descriptions.  Notably, add the
word "rip" to icedax description as it is a useful search term.  And
use a bullet list for the extra utils in genisoimage.


Modified: cdrkit/trunk/debian/control
===================================================================
--- cdrkit/trunk/debian/control	2007-01-03 18:29:35 UTC (rev 669)
+++ cdrkit/trunk/debian/control	2007-01-03 18:32:51 UTC (rev 670)
@@ -30,18 +30,19 @@
 Conflicts: mkhybrid, mkisofs (<< 9:1.0)
 Description: Creates ISO-9660 CD-ROM filesystem images
  genisoimage is a pre-mastering program for creating ISO-9660 CD-ROM 
- filesystem images, which can then be written to a CD-ROM (or DVD-ROM) using
+ filesystem images, which can then be written to CD or DVD media using
  the wodim program. genisoimage includes support for making bootable
- "El Torito" CD-ROMs, as well as CD-ROMs with support for the
+ "El Torito" CDs, as well as CDs with support for the
  Macintosh HFS filesystem.
  .
- The package also includes extra tools usefull for working with ISO images:
- mkzftree (to create iso9660 with compressed contents), dirsplit (to easily
- separate large directory contents into disks of predefined size) and
- geteltorito (to extract the initial/default boot image from a CD if existant).
+ The package also includes extra tools useful for working with ISO images:
+  * mkzftree - create ISO-9660 image with compressed contents
+  * dirsplit - easily separate large directory contents into disks of
+    predefined size
+  * geteltorito - extract an El Torito boot image from a CD image
  .
  Please install cdrkit-doc if you want most of the documentation and
- Readme-files.
+ README files.
 
 Package: icedax
 Architecture: any
@@ -51,13 +52,13 @@
 Replaces: cdda2wav (<< 9:1.0)
 Conflicts: cdda2wav (<< 9:1.0)
 Description: Creates WAV files from audio CDs
- icedax lets you digitally copy audio tracks from a CD-ROM, avoiding
+ icedax lets you digitally copy ("rip") audio tracks from a CD, avoiding
  the distortion that is introduced when recording via a sound card. Data 
  can be dumped into raw (cdr), wav or sun format sound files. Options control
  the recording format (stereo/mono; 8/16 bits; sampling rate, etc).
  .
  Please install cdrkit-doc if you want most of the documentation and
- Readme-files.
+ README files.
 
 Package: cdrkit-doc
 Architecture: all
@@ -65,8 +66,8 @@
 Replaces: cdrtools-doc
 Conflicts: cdrtools-doc
 Suggests: wodim, genisoimage, icedax
-Description: Documentation for the cdrkit package-suite
- This is the documentation for the cdrkit package-suite, namely
+Description: Documentation for the cdrkit package suite
+ This is the documentation for the cdrkit package suite, namely
  wodim, genisoimage and icedax.