[Debconf6-data-commit] r568 - proceedings/22-community-guidelines

[Joerg Jaspert]

Author: joerg
Date: 2006-04-20 19:40:24 +0000 (Thu, 20 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 568

Modified:
   proceedings/22-community-guidelines/paper.tex
Log:
Remove some references, as they dont look good here.


Modified: proceedings/22-community-guidelines/paper.tex
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--- proceedings/22-community-guidelines/paper.tex	2006-04-20 19:05:47 UTC (rev 567)
+++ proceedings/22-community-guidelines/paper.tex	2006-04-20 19:40:24 UTC (rev 568)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-\section*{abstract}
+\section*{Abstract}
 
      This is the \emph{Debian Community Guidelines}, a collection of
     what sane people are already doing everyday, written down so that we don't risk
@@ -6,28 +6,27 @@
  
 
      The Guidelines are divided in four parts:
- \begin{itemize}
+\begin{itemize}
 
-\item{}chapter \ref{main}: main suggestions to always keep in mind.
+\item{} main suggestions to always keep in mind.
 
 
-\item{}chapter \ref{comm}: suggestions specific to communicating with others.
+\item{} suggestions specific to communicating with others.
 
 
-\item{}chapter \ref{debian}: suggestions specific to working with Debian.
+\item{} suggestions specific to working with Debian.
 
 \end{itemize}
   
 
      These guidelines are mainly about interacting with other people.  For technical
     suggestions, please refer to the
- \href{http://www.debian.org/doc/developers-reference}{       Debian Developer's Reference}.
+ \href{http://www.debian.org/doc/developers-reference}{Debian Developer's Reference}.
  
 
      In addition to the guidelines, there is a collection of resources for
     moderators, listmasters, DPLs and other people with some leadership,
-    moderation, mediation or facilitation role (see chapter \ref{meta}).
- 
+    moderation, mediation or facilitation role (starting on page \pageref{meta}).
 
 
 % ------- 
@@ -121,9 +120,8 @@
 improving of our body of knowledge pleasant and sustainable over time.
  
 
- What follows is a collection of suggestions about these three aspects
-(Section \ref{comm-content}, Section \ref{comm-efficiency}, Section \ref{comm-sustain}),
-plus practical suggestions to cope with recurring communication problems (Section \ref{comm-howto-longthreads} and Section \ref{comm-howto-flamewars}).
+ What follows is a collection of suggestions about these three aspects,
+plus practical suggestions to cope with recurring communication problems.
  
 
 \subsection*{Improving the content}\label{comm-content}
@@ -773,7 +771,7 @@
 the situation and the possible ways out.
  
 
-  **Note**: the contents still sound academical and could use being rephrased in
+  \textbf{Note}: the contents still sound academical and could use being rephrased in
  an easier language.  Help is needed with it.