[Debconf6-data-commit] r425 - mail

[Neil McGovern]

Author: neilm
Date: 2006-03-23 17:28:28 +0000 (Thu, 23 Mar 2006)
New Revision: 425

Modified:
   mail/reconfirmation
Log:
SPG


Modified: mail/reconfirmation
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--- mail/reconfirmation	2006-03-23 17:03:47 UTC (rev 424)
+++ mail/reconfirmation	2006-03-23 17:28:28 UTC (rev 425)
@@ -2,44 +2,44 @@
 
 Thank you very much for registering for Debconf6!
 
-We would like to ask you to reconfirm your attendance until April
-3. Please go to
+We ask that you reconfirm your attendance before April 3. Please
+go to
 
   https://debconf6.debconf.org/comas/attendees/account/data
 
 and make sure to check the "I confirm my attendance" checkbox if
-you still plan to come. If your plans changed or you wont check
-that checkbox, you will not be considered from the free
+you still plan to come. If your plans changed or you don't check
+that checkbox, you will not be considered for the free
 accommodation and food. You could still attend debconf, but you
-would have to pay fully for your lodgin and meals at the
+would have to pay fully for your lodgings and meals at the
 hotel.
 
 Please add your flight number and arrival/departure date (at the
-airport). We need to know your arrival/departure day at the
-hotel for booking/planning reasons.
+airport). We need to know these for booking/planning the hotel and
+coordinating the transport.
 
-You can check for other people arriving at the same time on
+You can check for other people arriving at the same time at
 
   https://debconf6.debconf.org/comas/general/participants
 
-Check the "keep my flight info private" if you dont want this to
-be visible to other participants.
+Check the "keep my flight info private" if you don't want your 
+information to be visible to other participants.
 
 It is highly unlikely that we will be able to hand out notebooks
 this year. We recommend that you bring your own if you want to
-use the network or work.
+use the network for work.
 
 Please visit
 
   http://debconf6.debconf.org/comas/attendees/account/voting
 
-in order to pick the bofs and talks you would like to attend
+in order to pick the BoFs and talks you would like to attend
 during Debconf. Our scheduling software will attempt to place the
 events so that as many as possible can attend the lectures and
 meetings they are interested in. If voting is not open yet when you
-read this you can come back later.
+read this, you can come back later.
 
-If you would like to have a bof please register it soon if you
+If you would like to host a BoF, please register it soon if you
 want a good timeslot. Generally it will be possible to hold bofs
 even on short notice, if you find a place for it.