[SCM] UNNAMED PROJECT branch, master, updated. 20090201-1-45-g46c2aeb

[Chris Lamb]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit 5e4486a1216bd84a71a7c374ef68af9af40ff374
Author: Chris Lamb <lamby at debian.org>
Date:   Sun Feb 22 14:13:13 2009 +0000

    Misc grammar fixes in installation chapter.

diff --git a/xml/chapters/installation.xml b/xml/chapters/installation.xml
index 2745289..3e7d986 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/installation.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/installation.xml
@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@
 <listitem><para>Linux 2.6.x</para></listitem>
 </orderedlist>
 
-<para>Note especially that using a Debian installation is not required - &live-helper; will run on almost any distribution.</para>
+<para>Note that using Debian or a Debian-derived distribution is not required - &live-helper; will run on almost any operating system with the above requirements.</para>
 
 </section>
 
 <section>
 <title>Installing &live-helper;</title>
 
-<para>You may install &live-helper; in a number of different ways:</para>
+<para>You can install &live-helper; in a number of different ways:</para>
 
 <orderedlist>
 <listitem><para>From the Debian repository</para></listitem>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 <section>
 <title>From Backports.org</title>
 
-<para>Whilst &live-helper; and friends are not a part of Debian etch relase, they will work on &etch; as well. You will need the following programs:</para>
+<para>Whilst &live-helper; and friends were not a part of the Debian etch release, they will work on &etch; as well. You will need the following programs:</para>
 <orderedlist>
 <listitem><para>An <emphasis>etch</emphasis> backport of either <command>debootstrap</command> or <command>cdebootstrap</command> from backports.org</para></listitem>
 <listitem><para>The <emphasis>lenny</emphasis> or <emphasis>sid</emphasis> version of &live-helper;</para></listitem>
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@
 <section>
 <title>Installing &live-helper; on etch</title>
 
-<para>It is not recommended that you use &live-helper; from backports.org as it is likely to be out of date. The live-helper package from Lenny or Sid can be installed on Etch (without upgrading other packages, such as libc6; it's just shell scripts).</para>
+<para>It is not recommended that you use &live-helper; from backports.org as it is likely to be out of date. The live-helper package from &lenny; or &sid; can be installed on Etch (without upgrading other packages, such as libc6; it's just shell scripts).</para>
 <orderedlist>
 <listitem><para>Install debootstrap or cdebootstrap from backports.org (as indicated above).</para></listitem>
 <listitem>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 <section>
 <title>&live-initramfs;</title>
 
-<para><emphasis>N.B. You do not need to install on your host system to create customised Debian Live systems. However, doing so will do no harm.</emphasis></para>
+<para><emphasis>N.B. You do not need to install &live-initramfs; on your system to create customised Debian Live systems. However, doing so will do no harm.</emphasis></para>
 
 <section>
 <title>Using a customised &live-initramfs;</title>

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