[SCM] Debian Live Manual branch, master, updated. 20090301-1-21-g454cdf2

[Daniel Baumann]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit 043079c5df866beb5c27d2ce579aafaf250192a1
Author: Daniel Baumann <daniel at debian.org>
Date:   Sun Mar 1 17:16:38 2009 +0100

    Correcting previous additions to git commit instructions.

diff --git a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
index afdfaf4..9e1ae17 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
 
 <sect3 id="commiting">
 <title>Applying patches</title>
-<para>Directly commiting to the repository is possibly by anyone. However, we ask you to send bigger changes to the mailinglist before commiting them. In order to push to the repository, the following steps are required.</para>
+<para>Directly commiting to the repository is possibly by anyone. However, we ask you to send bigger changes to the mailinglist to discuss them first. In order to push to the repository, the following steps are required.</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Fetch the public commit key:</para>
@@ -130,14 +130,14 @@ Host git.debian.net
 EOF
 </screen></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>Get a recent clone of the manual through ssh:</para>
+<listitem><para>Checkout a clone of the manual through ssh:</para>
 <screen>$ git clone gitosis at git.debian.net:debian-live/live-manual.git</screen></listitem>
-<listitem><para>commit the file after editing. Write comments, that consist of full sefull sentences, 
-starting with a capital letter, ending with a full stop.  Usually starting with the form 'Fixing/Adding/Removing/Correcting/':</para>
-<screen>$ git commit mychangedfile</screen></listitem>
-<listitem><para>push the changes to the server:</para>
-<screen>$ git push gitosis at git.debian.net:debian-live/live-manual.git</screen></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>Commit the file after editing. Write commit messages, that consist of full sefull sentences, starting with a capital letter and ending with a full stop. Usually starting with the form 'Fixing/Adding/Removing/Correcting/':</para>
+<screen>$ git commit -a</screen></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>Push the commit to the server:</para>
+<screen>$ git push</screen></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
 

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