[SCM] Debian Live Manual branch, master, updated. 20090301-1-15-g333ff66

Geoff Simmons gsimmons at gsimmons.org
Wed Mar 11 20:48:15 UTC 2009


The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit 333ff668d407adde8182dedc3e2c433f09451f7f
Author: Geoff Simmons <gsimmons at gsimmons.org>
Date:   Thu Mar 12 07:41:50 2009 +1100

    Correcting one grammar and three spelling errors.

diff --git a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
index 23bc2f2..4f279b6 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/about/manual.xml
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 
 <sect3 id="commiting">
 <title>Applying patches</title>
-<para>Directly commiting to the repository is possibly by anyone. However, we ask you to send bigger changes to the mailinglist to discuss them first. In order to push to the repository, the following steps are required.</para>
+<para>Directly commiting to the repository is possible by anyone. However, we ask you to send bigger changes to the mailinglist to discuss them first. In order to push to the repository, the following steps are required.</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para>Fetch the public commit key:</para>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ EOF
 <listitem><para>Checkout a clone of the manual through ssh:</para>
 <screen>$ git clone gitosis at git.debian.net:debian-live/live-manual.git</screen></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>Commit the file after editing. Write commit messages, that consist of full sefull sentences, starting with a capital letter and ending with a full stop. Usually starting with the form 'Fixing/Adding/Removing/Correcting/':</para>
+<listitem><para>Commit the file after editing. Write commit messages, that consist of full useful sentences, starting with a capital letter and ending with a full stop. Usually starting with the form 'Fixing/Adding/Removing/Correcting/':</para>
 <screen>$ git commit -a</screen></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Push the commit to the server:</para>
diff --git a/xml/chapters/basics.xml b/xml/chapters/basics.xml
index 3e8e143..d10247e 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/basics.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/basics.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
 <varlistentry>
 <term>Initial RAM disk image (initrd)</term>
-<listitem><para>RAM disk setup for the Linux boot, containing modules possibly need to mount the filesystem's image and some scripts to do it.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>RAM disk setup for the Linux boot, containing modules possibly needed to mount the filesystem's image and some scripts to do it.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 <varlistentry>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 
 <varlistentry>
 <term>Bootloader</term>
-<listitem><para>A small piece of code, crafted to boot up from the chosen media, possibly proposing a prompt or menu to let select options/configuration, then loading the Linux kernel and its initrd to let it run with associated filesystem image. Different solutions can be proposed depending of the target media and fornat of filesystem containing the previous components: Isolinux to boot from a CD or DVD in ISO9660 format, syslinux for HDD or USB drive boot from a VFAT partition, GRUB for ext2/3 partition, pxelinux for PXE netboot...</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>A small piece of code, crafted to boot up from the chosen media, possibly proposing a prompt or menu to let select options/configuration, then loading the Linux kernel and its initrd to let it run with associated filesystem image. Different solutions can be proposed depending of the target media and format of filesystem containing the previous components: Isolinux to boot from a CD or DVD in ISO9660 format, syslinux for HDD or USB drive boot from a VFAT partition, GRUB for ext2/3 partition, pxelinux for PXE netboot...</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 
 </variablelist>

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