[SCM] live-manual branch, master, updated. debian/20100301-1-7-gb3ab923

[Eric Dantan Rzewnicki]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit b3ab9239f04abeb2fc5a690eb2dd23b7ca7ab553
Author: Eric Dantan Rzewnicki <eric at zhevny.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 9 17:40:20 2010 -0400

    Add a missing comma, remove _ from lh_config, minor rewording of an awkward
    sentence.

diff --git a/xml/chapters/about/project.xml b/xml/chapters/about/project.xml
index 35471e8..d2da448 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/about/project.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/about/project.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 <sect3>
 <title>What is wrong with current live systems</title>
 
-<para>There are already several Debian-based live systems and they are doing a great job. But from the Debian perspective most of them have one or more of the following disadvantages:</para>
+<para>There are already several Debian-based live systems and they are doing a great job. But, from the Debian perspective most of them have one or more of the following disadvantages:</para>
 
 <orderedlist>
 <listitem><para>They are unofficial projects, developed outside of Debian.</para></listitem>
@@ -62,9 +62,9 @@
 
 <para>Whenever we need a different default configuration, we will do that in coordination with its package maintainer in Debian.</para>
 
-<para>A system for configuring packages is provided using debconf in lh_config (use --preseed FILE) allowing custom configured packages to be installed in your custom produced Debian Live images, but for official live images only default configuration will be used. For more information, please see <xref linkend="customization"/>.</para>
+<para>A system for configuring packages is provided using debconf in <command>lh config</command> (use --preseed FILE) allowing custom configured packages to be installed in your custom produced Debian Live images, but for official live images only default configuration will be used. For more information, please see <xref linkend="customization"/>.</para>
 
-<para>Exception: There are a few essential changes needed to be make a live system alive (e.g. configuring pam to allow empty passwords). These essential changes have to be kept as minimal as possible and, should be merged within the Debian repository if possible.</para>
+<para>Exception: There are a few essential changes needed to bring a live system to life (e.g. configuring pam to allow empty passwords). These essential changes have to be kept as minimal as possible and should be merged within the Debian repository if possible.</para>
 </sect3>
 
 <sect3>

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