[SCM] live-manual branch, master, updated. debian/20100301-1-10-g4f7d846

[Eric Dantan Rzewnicki]

The following commit has been merged in the master branch:
commit 4f7d8469be9e0c1034430e7e7613f0a48fe8c960
Author: Eric Dantan Rzewnicki <eric at zhevny.com>
Date:   Fri Apr 9 19:45:12 2010 -0400

    More typo fixes, minor rewordings and lh_* conversions.

diff --git a/xml/chapters/basics.xml b/xml/chapters/basics.xml
index c3a0d63..1feb844 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/basics.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/basics.xml
@@ -45,12 +45,12 @@
 <title>First steps: building an ISO image</title>
 
 <para>The following sequence of helper commands, provided by &live-helper;, will create a basic ISO image containing just the Debian standard system without X.org. It is suitable for burning to CD or DVD media.</para>
-<para>First, we run the <filename>lh_config</filename> helper command which will create a <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy in the current directory for use by other helper commands:</para>
-<screen>$ lh_config</screen>
-<para>By passing no parameters to <filename>lh_config</filename>, we indicated that we wish to use the defaults, which will create an image of type binary (see <xref linkend="lh_config"/>).</para>
-<para>Now that we have a <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy, we may build the image with <filename>lh_build</filename> helper command:</para>
+<para>First, we run the <filename>lh config</filename> helper command which will create a <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy in the current directory for use by other helper commands:</para>
+<screen>$ lh config</screen>
+<para>By passing no parameters to <filename>lh config</filename> we indicated that we wish to use the defaults. This will create an image of type binary (see <xref linkend="lh-config"/>).</para>
+<para>Now that we have a <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy, we may build the image with the <filename>lh build</filename> helper command:</para>
 <screen># lh_build</screen>
-<para>This process can take a while, depending on the speed of your network connection (see <xref linkend="lh_build"/>).</para>
+<para>This process can take a while, depending on the speed of your network connection (see <xref linkend="lh-build"/>).</para>
 
 <section>
 <title>Testing an ISO image with Qemu</title>
@@ -77,20 +77,20 @@ $ wodim binary.iso
 <title>Building an USB/HDD image</title>
 
 <para>The following sequence of helper commands will create a basic USB/HDD image containing just the Debian standard system without X.org. It is suitable for booting from USB sticks, USB hard drives, and various other portable storage devices.</para>
-<para>Note if you created an iso image with the previous example, you will need to clean up your working directory with the <filename>lh_clean</filename> helper command (see <xref linkend="lh_clean"/>):</para>
-<screen>$ lh_clean --binary</screen>
-<para>Run the <filename>lh_config</filename> helper command with the parameters to configure the <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy to create a USD/HDD image type:</para>
-<screen>$ lh_config -b usb-hdd</screen>
-<para>Now build the image with <filename>lh_build</filename> helper command:</para>
-<screen># lh_build</screen>
+<para>Note if you created an iso image with the previous example, you will need to clean up your working directory with the <filename>lh clean</filename> helper command (see <xref linkend="lh-clean"/>):</para>
+<screen>$ lh clean --binary</screen>
+<para>Run the <filename>lh config</filename> helper command with the parameters to configure the <filename>"config/"</filename> hierarchy to create a USB/HDD image type:</para>
+<screen>$ lh config -b usb-hdd</screen>
+<para>Now build the image with the <filename>lh build</filename> helper command:</para>
+<screen># lh build</screen>
 
 <section>
 <title>Copying USB/HDD image to a USB stick</title>
 
-<para>The generated binary image contains a <acronym>VFAT</acronym> partition and the <command>syslinux</command> bootloader, ready to be directly written on an USB stick. Plug in an USB stick with a size larger than <filename>binary.img</filename>'s one, and type:
+<para>The generated binary image contains a <acronym>VFAT</acronym> partition and the <command>syslinux</command> bootloader, ready to be directly written on an USB stick. Plug in an USB stick with a size larger than that of <filename>binary.img</filename> and type:
 <screen>$ dd if=binary.img of=${USBSTICK}</screen>
-where <replaceable>${USBSTICK}</replaceable> is the device file of your key, like <filename>/dev/sda</filename> (not a partition like <filename>/dev/sda1</filename>!); you can find the right device name by looking in <command>dmesg</command>'s output after plugging the stick, for example).</para>
-<important>This will definitely overwrite any previous contents on youro stick!</important>
+where <replaceable>${USBSTICK}</replaceable> is the device file of your key, like <filename>/dev/sdb</filename> (not a partition like <filename>/dev/sdb1</filename>!); you can find the right device name by looking in <command>dmesg</command>'s output after plugging in the stick, for example.</para>
+<important>This will definitely overwrite any previous contents on your stick!</important>
 </section>
 
 <section>
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ If you want to use the remaining free space after you have installed the <filena
 </screen>
 
 <para>
-After the creation of the partition you have to create a filsystem on it. One possible choice would be ext2 (ext3 isn't recommended because the journaling causes too much writes to the stick).
+After the creation of the partition you have to create a filsystem on it. One possible choice would be ext2 (ext3 isn't recommended because the journaling causes too many writes to the stick).
 </para>
 
 <screen>
diff --git a/xml/chapters/overview.xml b/xml/chapters/overview.xml
index 3464a79..cd07254 100644
--- a/xml/chapters/overview.xml
+++ b/xml/chapters/overview.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
 </variablelist>
 </para>
 
-<section id="lh_config">
+<section id="lh-config">
 <title>The <filename>lh_config</filename> helper</title>
 <para>As discussed in <xref linkend="live-helper"/>, the scripts that make up &live-helper; source their configuration from a single directory named <command>config/</command>. As constructing this directory by hand would be time-consuming and error-prone, the <filename>lh_config</filename> helper can be used to create skeleton configuration folders.</para>
 
@@ -110,12 +110,12 @@ $ lh_config --apt aptitude --binary-images net --hostname live-machine --usernam
 
 </section>
 
-<section id="lh_build">
+<section id="lh-build">
 <title>The <filename>lh_build</filename> helper</title>
 <para>FIXME</para>
 </section>
 
-<section id="lh_clean">
+<section id="lh-clean">
 <title>The <filename>lh_clean</filename> helper</title>
 <para>It is the job of the <filename>lh_clean</filename> helper to remove various parts of a Live helper build.</para>
 </section>

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