r36359 - /packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control

[dcaliste-guest at users.alioth.debian.org]

Author: dcaliste-guest
Date: Fri Apr  9 07:28:42 2010
New Revision: 36359

URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/debian-science/?sc=1&rev=36359
Log:
Further improvements to the package descriptions.

Modified:
    packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control

Modified: packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control
URL: http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/debian-science/packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control?rev=36359&op=diff
==============================================================================
--- packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control (original)
+++ packages/etsf-io/trunk/debian/control Fri Apr  9 07:28:42 2010
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: Binary tools to check, merge and read ETSF files
- The European Theoretical Spectroscopy Facility (ETSF) is an
- e-infrastructure dedicated to providing support and services for ongoing
+ The European Theoretical Spectroscopy Facility (ETSF) is a European
+ network dedicated to providing support and services for ongoing
  research in academic, government and industrial laboratories.
  .
  The ETSF is divided into 7 beamlines, each of which is concerned with
@@ -33,21 +33,21 @@
  specifications, as well as widely usable pieces of software.
  .
  ETSF_IO is a library of F90 routines to read/write the ETSF file format.
- This package contains the user tool to:
-  - check file conformance to the specification ;
-  - inquiry file for contents ;
-  - merge multiple files from parallel runs as specified in the
-    specification.
+ This package contains the user tools to:
+  - check file conformance to the specifications;
+  - extract data from files;
+  - merge multiple files from parallel runs, as specified in the
+    specifications.
 
 Package: libetsf-io-doc
 Section: doc
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Developper documentation API and tutorials for ETSF_IO
+Description: Developer documentation API and tutorials for ETSF_IO
  ETSF_IO is a library of F90 routines to read/write the ETSF file format.
  .
  This Package contains the HTML documentation of the API and some tutorials
- on how to used the library in codes.
+ on how to use the library in electronic structure codes.
 
 Package: libetsf-io-dev
 Architecture: any
@@ -56,6 +56,6 @@
 Description: Static libraries and Fortran module files of ETSF_IO
  ETSF_IO is a library of F90 routines to read/write the ETSF file format.
  .
- This package contains the static libraries provided by ETSF_IO to add
- the capabilities of read/write ETSF files for electronic structure codes.
- It also contains the module file used by Fortran compiler.
+ This package contains the static libraries provided by ETSF_IO to let
+ electronic structure codes read and write ETSF files. It also contains
+ the module file used by the Fortran compiler.