[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-31.wml 
Log Message:
Final tweaks

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/08/01 05:53:57	1.23
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/08/01 06:16:15	1.24
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 #include <joey.style>
 
-<page title="Debian Weekly News #31 -- unreleased">
+<page title="Debian Weekly News #31 -- August 2nd, 2006">
 
 <p>Welcome to this year's 31st issue of DWN, the weekly newsletter for the
-Debian community.  Christopf Berg <a
+Debian community.  Christoph Berg <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-qa/2006/07/msg00093.html">announced</a>
 nine new members of the QA team who already work on outstanding issues in the
 <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> release.  Gintautas Miliauskas <a
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Branding for Debian Derivates.</strong> Anthony Towns <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/07/msg00241.html">proposed</a>
-to introduce an official branding programme for derivatived distributions to
+to introduce an official branding programme for derived distributions to
 help our derivatives get the benefits of Debian's reputation.  In the essence
 the derivates should listen to their users and cooperate with the Free
 Software community.  In return Debian should provide a logo, add a link from
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Status of translated Packages Descriptions.</strong> Michael Vogt <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01323.html">asked</a>
-for testing of <a href="http://packages.debian.org/apt/">APT</a> from
+for testing of <a href="http://packages.debian.org/apt">APT</a> from
 experimental. This version supports translated package descriptions which are
 already available for <a href="$(HOME)/releases/sid/">sid</a> on many
 mirrors and on the Debian description translation <a
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/comm/jpnevulator">jpnevulator</a>
     &mdash; Serial sniffer.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/utils/multisync-tools">multisync-tools</a>
-    &mdash; PIM Synchronization Command Line Tools.</li>
+    &mdash; PIM Synchronisation Command Line Tools.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/science/necpp">necpp</a>
     &mdash; NEC2 Evolution Antenna Modelling System.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/open-iscsi">open-iscsi</a>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
 
 <ul>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/44bsd-rdist">44bsd-rdist</a>
-     &mdash; 4.4BSD rdist..
+     &mdash; 4.4BSD rdist.
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/380192">Bug#380192</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/mail/dcc-client">dcc</a>
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/380542">Bug#380542</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/devel/gch">gch</a>
-     &mdash; Ada quality & style checker.
+     &mdash; Ada quality &amp; style checker.
      (<a href="http://bugs.debian.org/380193">Bug#380193</a>)
      </li>
 <li> <a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/x11/gkrellongrun">gkrellongrun</a>
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/340349">Bug#340349</a>:
      Request of QA, superseded by openldap2.3; RC-buggy (non-free content)
 </li>
-<li> ultrapossum &mdash; Multifunctional LDAP Solution
+<li> ultrapossum &mdash; Multi-functional LDAP Solution
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/378885">Bug#378885</a>:
      Request of QA, dead upstream, unmaintained, depends on removed openldap2.2
 </li>