[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-32.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/03 16:54:10	1.11
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/03 16:54:17	1.12
@@ -21,18 +21,19 @@
 
 # From: Mohammed Adnène Trojette <adn+deb at diwi.org>
 
-<p><strong>Debian Architectures statistics.</strong> Petter Reinholdtsen
+<p><strong>Debian Architectures Statistics.</strong> Petter Reinholdtsen
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01325.html">\
 reported</a> about the architecture distribution in Debian, as reported
 by the <a href="http://popcon.debian.org">popularity contest</a>. He
-noted that the ARM port is gaining interest among more users whereas
-the Alpha and Sparc ports are losing market shares. Joey Hess <a
+noted that the <a href="$(HOME)/ports/arm/">ARM</a> port is gaining interest
+among more users whereas the <a href="$(HOME)/ports/alpha/">Alpha</a> and <a
+href="$(HOME)/ports/sparc/">Sparc</a> ports are losing market shares. Joey Hess <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01362.html">\
-suggested</a> that the nslu2 machines are a
-good reason for this increase of ARM. The <a
+suggested</a> that the Linksys NSLU2 machines are a
+good reason for this increase of ARM users.  The <a
 href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/popularity-contest">\
-popularity contest</a> package is also used to decide the installation
-CD a package will be in.</p>
+popularity contest</a> package is also used as a base to decide the
+installation CD a package will be in.</p>
 
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 that you update your systems if you have any of these packages installed.</p>