[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-32.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/04 04:52:58	1.17
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/04 04:54:47	1.18
@@ -37,23 +37,23 @@
 
 <p><strong>New Information Media for Users.</strong> Wolfgang Lonien <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/08/msg00187.html">\
- announced</a> the creation of <a href="http://www.thedebianuser.org">The
+announced</a> the creation of <a href="http://www.thedebianuser.org">The
 Debian User</a>, a website that will aggregate thoughts and comments of
 Debian users. The same day, Andreas Barth <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/08/msg00030.html">\
 announced</a> the launch of <a
-href="http://times.debian.net">DebianTimes</a>; it is intended
-to deliver larger and smaller "nice items" to developers and
-interested Debian users. DebianTimes is available as html-page and <a
-href="http://times.debian.net/?format=rss20.xml">rss-feed</a>.</p>
+href="http://times.debian.net">DebianTimes</a>, which  is intended
+to deliver larger and smaller nice items to developers and
+interested Debian users. DebianTimes is available as html-page and RSS <a
+href="http://times.debian.net/?format=rss20.xml">feed</a>.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Bits from the Stable Release Team.</strong> Andreas Barth <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/08/msg00035.html">\
-announced</a> that Dann Frazier is now member of the
-Stable Release Team to improve kernel updates. A new <a
-href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/proposed-updates.html">page</a> is
-also available to track packages which are waiting for being accepted
-into proposed-updates.</p>
+announced</a> that Dann Frazier became a member of the
+Stable Release Team to handle and improve kernel updates.  A new <a
+href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/proposed-updates.html">webpage</a> created
+by Martin Zoble-Helas is also available to track packages that are waiting to
+be accepted for proposed-updates.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Debian adopted in the Extremadura.</strong> The project <a
 href="$(HOME)/News/2006/20060803">announced</a> that the local <a