[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-32.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Bill Wohler

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/07 15:25:37	1.33
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/07 21:53:28	1.34
@@ -32,17 +32,19 @@
 
 <p><strong>Debian Architectures Statistics.</strong> Petter Reinholdtsen
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01325.html">\
-reported</a> about the architecture distribution in Debian, as reported
+reported</a> on the architecture distribution in Debian, as reported
 by the <a href="http://popcon.debian.org">popularity contest</a>. He
-noted that the <a href="$(HOME)/ports/arm/">ARM</a> port is gaining interest
-among more users whereas the <a href="$(HOME)/ports/alpha/">Alpha</a> and <a
-href="$(HOME)/ports/sparc/">Sparc</a> ports are losing market shares. Joey Hess <a
+noted that an increasing number of users are using the <a
+href="$(HOME)/ports/arm/">ARM</a> port whereas the <a
+href="$(HOME)/ports/alpha/">Alpha</a> and <a
+href="$(HOME)/ports/sparc/">Sparc</a> ports are losing market share.  Joey
+Hess <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01362.html">\
 suggested</a> that the Linksys NSLU2 machines are a
-good reason for this increase of ARM users.  The <a
-href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/popularity-contest">\
-popularity contest</a> package is also used as a base to decide the
-installation CD a package will be in.</p>
+good reason for this increase in ARM users.  The <a
+href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/popularity-contest">
+popularity contest</a> package is also used to decide the installation
+CD for a particular package.</p>
 
 <p><strong>New Information Media for Users.</strong> Wolfgang Lonien <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/08/msg00187.html">\
@@ -51,9 +53,9 @@
 Debian users. The same day, Andreas Barth <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/08/msg00030.html">\
 announced</a> the launch of <a
-href="http://times.debian.net">DebianTimes</a>, which  is intended
-to deliver larger and smaller nice items to developers and
-interested Debian users. DebianTimes is available as html-page and RSS <a
+href="http://times.debian.net">DebianTimes</a>, which is intended
+to deliver news items to developers and
+interested Debian users. DebianTimes is available on the web and as an RSS <a
 href="http://times.debian.net/?format=rss20.xml">feed</a>.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Bits from the Stable Release Team.</strong> Andreas Barth <a