[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-32.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections and improvement by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/08 18:28:25	1.37
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-32.wml	2006/08/09 05:53:17	1.38
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/07/msg01362.html">\
 suggested</a> that the Linksys NSLU2 machines are a
 good reason for this increase in ARM users.  The <a
-href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/popularity-contest">
-popularity contest</a> package is also used to decide the installation
+href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/misc/popularity-contest">\
+popularity contest</a> package is also used to decide the number of the installation
 CD for a particular package.</p>
 
 <p><strong>New Information Media for Users.</strong> Wolfgang Lonien <a
@@ -219,11 +219,11 @@
 </li>
 <li> newsflash &mdash; Gets news with the newnews command from a server
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/312208">Bug#312208</a>:
-     Request of QA: orphaned, upstream gone, few users, plenty of alternatives
+     Request of QA, orphaned, upstream gone, few users, plenty of alternatives
 </li>
 <li> postit &mdash; Sends news from your local server to a remote host
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/312209">Bug#312209</a>:
-     Request of QA: orphaned, upstream gone, no users, plenty of alternatives
+     Request of QA, orphaned, upstream gone, no users, plenty of alternatives
 </li>
 <li> libkpathsea3 &mdash; Path search library for teTeX (devel part)
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/369096">Bug#369096</a>: