[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-35.wml 
Log Message:
Rewording

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-35.wml	2006/08/27 18:36:59	1.12
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-35.wml	2006/08/27 18:37:08	1.13
@@ -56,15 +56,14 @@
 
 # From: Tobias Toedter <t.toedter at gmx.net>
 
-<p><strong>Translation of package descriptions.</strong>
+<p><strong>Translation of Package Descriptions.</strong>
 Martijn van Oosterhout <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-i18n/2006/08/msg00030.html">announced</a>
-that he wrote the <q>DDTS Satellite</q>, a web frontend to the
-e-mail based <a href="http://ddtp.debian.net/">Debian Description
-Translation Project</a> (DDTP). The most important advantage over the
-e-mail interface is that the DDTS Satellite provides a review mechanism
-for translations.
-</p>
+that he wrote a system that can send and receive e-mails from the <a
+href="http://ddtp.debian.net/">Debian Description Translation Project</a>
+and provides a web frontend where translating actually takes place.
+The most important advantage over the pure e-mail interface is that this
+additional system provides a review mechanism for translations.</p>
 
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