[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-42.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/03 16:23:19	1.3
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/03 16:47:09	1.4
@@ -7,26 +7,26 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de> (2x)
 
-<p><strong>20.000 submitters for Popularity Contest.</strong> Petter
+<p><strong>20.000 Submitters for Popularity Contest.</strong> Petter
 Reinholdsen <a
-href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/11/msg01031.html">informed</a>
-that the <a href="https://alioth.debian.org/projects/popcon/">Popularity
-Contest</a> project counted its 20.000th submitter. By installing the
-popularity-contest <a
-href="http://packages.debian.org/popularity-contest">package</a> users
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/11/msg01031.html">reported</a>
+that Debian's <a href="https://alioth.debian.org/projects/popcon/">Popularity
+Contest</a> project passed 20,000 submitters.  By installing the <a
+href="http://packages.debian.org/popularity-contest">popularity-contest</a>
+package users
 can collect and submit the list of installed packages on their systems
 which helps our developers to <a href="http://popcon.debian.org/">\
-see</a> how popular their packages are and where is a need for
-additional packages.</p>
+see</a> how popular their packages are and where a need for
+additional packages is.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Five years debianforum.de.</strong> On December, 20th the german
+<p><strong>Five years debianforum.de.</strong> On December, 20th the German
 speaking Debian discussion board <a href="http://www.debianforum.de/">\
 debianforum.de</a> is celebrating its fifth anniversary. Created in late
 2001 by Sebastian Feltel debianforum.de was build upon the ideals and
 ideas that made Debian what it is now. Today the forum with more than
-17.000 members is one of the largest Debian discussion boards where
+17,000 members is one of the largest discussion boards for Debian where
 beginners and advanced users help each other in an friendly and
-constructive manner. With booths on several GNU/Linux events the forum
+constructive manner.  With booths at several Free Software events the forum
 is also active outside the world wide web.</p>
 
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