[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-42.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/11 13:43:37	1.13
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-42.wml	2006/12/11 14:05:11	1.14
@@ -71,14 +71,14 @@
 packages on the first installation medium rather than the KDE ones.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Etch frozen.</strong> Andreas Barth, member of the
-<a href="http://release.debian.org/">Debian Release team</a>
-<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00004.html">\
-informed</a> that the upcoming <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">Etch</a>
-release is now frozen. This means that updates to the packages contained
-in etch will only happen if they were approved by the Release team.
-Before the Release can happen there are several things which need to be
-done, especially fixing <a href="http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical">release-critical</a> bugs or
-testing the security support for Etch.</p>
+<a href="http://release.debian.org/">Debian Release team</a>, <a
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00004.html">\
+announced</a> the freeze of the upcoming <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">\
+etch</a> release.  Packages contained in this distribution will only be
+updated after manual approval by the release team.  Before etch can be
+released, several issues need to be addressed, especially <a
+href="http://bugs.debian.org/release-critical/">release-critical</a> bugs and
+security support.</p>
 
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