[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-28.wml 
Log Message:
Final tweaks

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-28.wml	2006/07/11 20:15:23	1.14
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-28.wml	2006/07/11 20:22:15	1.15
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 that several packages add hidden files inside of <code>/usr</code>.  Linas
 Åvirblis <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg00248.html">\
 added</a> that these files may confuse security scanners and Henrique de Moraes
-Holschuh <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg00249.html">\ 
+Holschuh <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg00249.html">\
 stated</a> that it is bad a form to have hidden files anywhere but under the
 user's home directories.  Mike Hommey <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg00245.html">revealed</a>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 (SAT) so that a normal resolvers could find a solution.  This produced some
 amusing outcome such as a Debian <a
 href="http://brion.inria.fr/anla/health?bundle=U&amp;architecture=i386">\
-wheather</a> that represents the installability status of the packages or a
+weather</a> that represents the installability status of the packages or a
 SAT temperature that denotes the difficulty of resolving a set of
 dependencies.</p>
 
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/sound/twolame">twolame</a>
     &mdash; MPEG Audio Layer 2 encoder (command line frontend).</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/admin/uswsusp">uswsusp</a>
-    &mdash; Tools to use userspace software suspend provided by linux.</li>
+    &mdash; Tools to use userspace software suspend provided by Linux.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/games/vdrift">vdrift</a>
     &mdash; Open Source drift racing simulation.</li>
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/admin/vzctl">vzctl</a>
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> okle &mdash; DVD player for KDE
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/333816">Bug#333816</a>:
-     Request of QA, orphaned, superseded by kaffeine..
+     Request of QA, orphaned, superseded by kaffeine.
 </li>
 <li> cvsbook &mdash; Open Source Development with CVS, the book
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/337849">Bug#337849</a>:
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/359951">Bug#359951</a>:
      Request of maintainer, superseded by vdradmin-am.
 </li>
-<li> drbd &mdash; RAID 1 over tcp/ip for Linux utilities
+<li> drbd &mdash; RAID 1 over TCP/IP for Linux utilities
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/361263">Bug#361263</a>:
      Request of maintainer, obsolete; replaced by drbd0.7 and drbd8.
 </li>
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/361895">Bug#361895</a>:
      Request of maintainer, merged in to emacs21.
 </li>
-<li> xen &mdash; Patch to linux for the XEN sub-architecture
+<li> xen &mdash; Patch to Linux for the Xen sub-architecture
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/362026">Bug#362026</a>:
      Request of QA: obsolete, superseded by xen-3.0.
 </li>
@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> zope-cmf1.4 &mdash; Zope content management framework (CMF), 1.4 branch
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/362284">Bug#362284</a>:
-     Request of maintainer, superseded by zipe-cmf1..
+     Request of maintainer, superseded by zipe-cmf1.
 </li>
 <li> zope-i18nlayer &mdash; Fully transparent multilingual content solution for zope/plone
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/362286">Bug#362286</a>:
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> libsem &mdash; Portable, pthread-based semaphore library, development files
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/373088">Bug#373088</a>:
-     Request of maintainer, old, unused, rc buggy.
+     Request of maintainer, old, unused, RC-buggy.
 </li>
 <li> pike-crypto-build &mdash; Build only package for building pike-crypto binary package
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/373114">Bug#373114</a>:
@@ -550,9 +550,9 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/376475">Bug#376475</a>:
      Request of maintainer, upstream unsupported, obsolete.
 </li>
-<li> pgmonitor &mdash; Tcl/TK script for examining the status of PostgreSQL backends
+<li> pgmonitor &mdash; Tcl/Tk script for examining the status of PostgreSQL backends
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/376725">Bug#376725</a>:
-     Request of maintainer, merged in to postgresql.
+     Request of maintainer, merged in to PostgreSQL.
 </li>
 <li> rgtk &mdash; GNU R binding for Gtk
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/376738">Bug#376738</a>: