[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-29.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Helge Kreutzmann

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/18 17:12:04	1.29
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-29.wml	2006/07/18 17:14:44	1.30
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
 Debian community.  Harald Welte <a
 href="http://gnumonks.org/~laforge/weblog/2006/05/12#20060512-sarge-root">\
 announced</a> the availability of a root <a
-href="http://people.openezx.org/laforge/">filesystem</a> and a corresponding
-kernel plus instructions for EZX phones based on Debian sarge.  Raphaël
+href="http://people.openezx.org/laforge/">filesystem</a> based on Debian sarge
+and a corresponding kernel plus instructions for EZX phones.  Raphaël
 Hertzog has the <a
 href="http://www.ouaza.com/wordpress/2006/05/26/improving-debian-as-a-whole/">\
 impression</a> that the Debian project is merely trying to keep packages
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 <p><strong>Packages Diff Files.</strong> Tyler MacDonald <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg01216.html">wondered</a>
 if index diff files should be used for local archives at all.  They have been
-invented to reduce the need to download several megabytes of
+invented to avoid the need to download several megabytes of
 <code>Packages</code> files upon upgrade, especially for machines with low or
 limited bandwidth.  Alec Berryman <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/06/msg01229.html">pointed</a>