[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-31.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/07/31 10:17:20	1.13
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-31.wml	2006/07/31 13:44:37	1.14
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@
 <p><strong>Uploading with proper Urgencies.</strong> Adeodato Simó <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/07/msg00008.html">\
 reminded</a> the developers to upload fixed packages with urgency
-<code>high</code> if it fixes a security-related bug.  The urgency
+<code>high</code> if they fix security-related bugs.  The urgency
 <code>medium</code> should be used for release-critical bugs including
 corrections to failures to build from source on one or another <a
-href="$(HOME)/ports/">architecture</a>.  Since these uploads will get less
+href="$(HOME)/ports/">architecture</a>.  Since these uploads will stay less
 days in <a href="$(HOME)/releases/unstable/">unstable</a> before they migrate
 into <a href="$(HOME)/releases/testing/">testing</a>, they should be prepared
 with extra care as well.</p>
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 help our derivatives get the benefits of Debian's reputation.  In the essence
 the derivates should listen to their users and cooperate with the Free
 Software community.  In return Debian should provide a logo, add a link from
-its website, cooperate on press releases provide and a supportive basis for
+its website, cooperate on press releases and provide a supportive basis for
 future cooperation and consultation.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Key Management for Secure APT.</strong> Joey Schulze <a
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 for attacks and prefers a third party authority to sign the keys.  Florian
 Weimer <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-release/2006/07/msg00201.html">\
-stated</a> hat the only approach known to work is static keys for stable
+stated</a> that the only approach known to work is static keys for stable
 releases and stable security updates.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Supporting Exim 3 in Etch?</strong> Marc Haber <a