[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-41.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/18 15:34:33	1.9
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/18 15:36:50	1.10
@@ -43,17 +43,17 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de>
 
-<p><strong>Debian Installer Release Candidate 1.</strong> Frans pop <a
+<p><strong>First Debian Installer Release Candidate.</strong> Frans pop <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/11/msg00003.html">\
 announced</a> the first release candiate of the <a
-href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer">Debian Installer</a> for <a
-href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">Etch</a>. After a long time of development
-this release includes a lot of improvments like installing onto
-encrypted LVM partitions, an <a
-href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianInstaller/GUI">graphical GTK-based
-installation</a> and partition resizing. This release is based on Linux
-2.6.17, a second release candidate is planned which will install Linux
-2.6.18, which will be also the default kernel for Etch.</p>
+href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer">debian-installer</a> for <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">etch</a>.  After a long time of development
+this release candidate includes a lot of improvments like installing onto
+encrypted LVM partitions, a <a
+href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianInstaller/GUI">graphical</a> GTK-based
+installation method and partition resising.  It is based on the Linux kernel
+2.6.17.  A second release candidate is planned which will use Linux
+2.6.18, the default kernel for etch.</p>
 
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