[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2006-41.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/27 07:58:34	1.19
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2006-41.wml	2006/11/27 08:40:31	1.20
@@ -88,26 +88,25 @@
 
 # From: Sebastian Feltel <sebastian at feltel.de> (2x)
 
-<p><strong>New SPARC development machine.</strong> Martin Michlmayr
-<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/11/msg00138.html">
-informed</a> that Sun has donated a new Sun Fire T2000 to the Debian
-project. The machine will be used for the Debian <a href="
-$(HOME)/ports/sparc">SPARC</a> port and consists of 8 UltraSparc T1
-processor cores, 32 GB of RAM and 2 x 70 GB of hard disk space. The
-machine is currently not in the debian.org domain to give external
-people access to it. People who want to have access should contact <a
-href="mailto:waldi at debian.org"> Bastian Blank</a>. The Debian project
+<p><strong>New Sparc Development Machine.</strong> Martin Michlmayr
+<a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2006/11/msg00138.html">\
+reported</a> that Sun has donated a new Sun Fire T2000 to the Debian
+project.  The machine will be used for the <a
+href="$(HOME)/ports/sparc/">sparc</a> port and consists of 8 UltraSparc T1
+processor cores, 32&nbsp;GB of RAM and two 70&nbsp;GB hard disks.  The
+machine is not in the debian.org domain to give external
+people access to it.  Developers who want to have access to it should contact
+Bastian Blank.  The Debian project
 would like to take the opportunity to thank Sun for the donation.</p>
 
-<p><strong>New Debian Archive Signing Key</strong> For the upcoming release
-of <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">Etch</a> there was a new GnuPG <a
-href="http://pgpkeys.pca.dfn.de/pks/lookup?search=0x6070D3A1&op=vindex">
-Signing-Key</a> created. Etch will be the first Debian release which
-supports the feature called "secure apt". With secure apt users are able
-to check the authenticity of Debian packages prior to installing
-it on their machines. A <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/SecureApt">
-wiki</a> page explains how to import the new Signing-Key and gives an
-overview on how secure apt is working.</p>
+<p><strong>New Debian Archive Signing Key.</strong> For the upcoming release
+of <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> a new GnuPG <a
+href="http://pgpkeys.pca.dfn.de/pks/lookup?search=0x6070D3A1&amp;op=vindex">\
+key</a> has been created.  This is the first Debian release supporting <a
+href="http://wiki.debian.org/SecureApt">Secure APT</a> so that users are able
+to verify the authenticity of Debian packages prior to installing them
+on their machines.  The Wiki page explains how to import the new signing key
+and provides an overview about the functinonality of Secure APT.</p>
 
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