[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-03.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/03 13:04:10	1.4
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/03 13:19:56	1.5
@@ -18,17 +18,17 @@
 scripts</a> written by Margarita Manterola on the <a
 href="http://women.debian.org/wiki/">Debian Women Wiki</a>.</p>
 
-<p><strong>db.debian.org and infrastructure updates</strong>  Ryan Murray <a
+<p><strong>LDAP and Infrastructure Updates.</strong>  Ryan Murray <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00010.html">\
-announced</a> new fields on Debian LDAP schema: Date of birth (developer-only
-visible), Gender (world visible) and several mail fields to allow the developer
-to disable their @debian.org email addres, specify a whitelist, enable
+announced</a> new fields in the Debian LDAP schema: Date of birth (developer-only
+visible), Gender (world visible), and several fields to allow the developer
+to disable their @debian.org email address, specify a whitelist, enable
 greylisting and sender verification callouts or specify RBL and RHSBL lists to
-be checked at SMTP time.  Joerg Jaspert <a
+be checked at SMTP time.  Jörg Jaspert <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2006/12/msg00011.html">\
 added</a> some important points about fields available via the mail gateway
-and fields available only via the web interface.  He also added information
-about how the developers could help with userdir-ldap.</p>
+and fields available only via the web interface.  He also mentioned
+how developers could help with <code>userdir-ldap</code>.</p>
 
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