[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-03.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/05 08:28:17	1.8
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/05 08:50:56	1.9
@@ -42,16 +42,16 @@
 contact Wouter Verhelst by <a
 href="mailto:wouter+planet at debian.org">mail</a>.</p>
 
-<p><strong>New Zealands Electoral Enrolment powered by Debian</strong>
-André Felipe Machado <a href=
-"http://computerworld.co.nz/news.nsf/news/072965C09248DA04CC257268000C6C7F">
-pointed</a> out that New Zealands < <a href=
-"http://www.elections.org.nz/">electronic election enrollment system</a>
-is now powered by Debian GNU/Linux. The PostgreSQL-based system
-consisting two clusters in different locations replaced the former
+<p><strong>Debian powers New Zealand's Electoral Enrolment.</strong>
+Rodney Gedda Sydney <a
+href="http://computerworld.co.nz/news.nsf/news/072965C09248DA04CC257268000C6C7F">\
+reported</a> that New Zealands <a href="http://www.elections.org.nz/">\
+electronic election enrollment system</a>
+is powered by Debian GNU/Linux.  The system consists of two clusters of
+PostgreSQL databases in different locations that replace the former
 system of decentralised Oracle databases with VisualBasic frontends. The
-new system also increases the voting participation by automaticly
-informing eligible voter about ongoing votes.</p>
+new system also increases voting participation by automatically
+informing eligible voters about ongoing votes.</p>
 
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