[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-03.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/08 10:26:48	1.13
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-03.wml	2007/02/08 11:04:44	1.14
@@ -77,13 +77,13 @@
 the <a href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianInstaller/GUI">graphical
 installer</a>.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Hewlett Packard to offer Debian support</strong> Hewlett
-Packard <a href=
-"http://h71028.www7.hp.com/services/cache/442406-0-0-0-121.html">
-announced</a> to support Customers running Debian GNU/Linux on its
+<p><strong>Debian GNU/Linux Support from Hewlett-Packard.</strong>
+Hewlett-Packard <a
+href="http://h71028.www7.hp.com/services/cache/442406-0-0-0-121.html">\
+announced</a> to support customers running Debian GNU/Linux on their
 business line products ranging from HP t5725 Thin Clients to ProLiant
 and BladeSystem file and application servers. Debian is also available
-pre-installed and configured on some product series.</p>
+pre-installed and configured on several product series.</p>
 
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