[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-01.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/10 10:03:43	1.8
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/10 10:21:41	1.9
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@
 
 <p><strong>Debian-Installer for Sony PS3.</strong>  Kenshi Muto <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-boot/2007/01/msg00049.html">announced</a>
-that his friend, Takeshi Yaegashi, succeeded to install Debian on a Sony
-PlayStation 3 (PS3), which is a ppc64 architecture that some Linux
-distributions and NetBSD already have a port. Yaegashi has a <a
-href="http://www.keshi.org/moin/moin.cgi/PS3/Debian/Installer">wiki</a> that
-describes the installation using a customized version of <a
-href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer">d-i</a>.</p>
+that his friend, Takeshi Yaegashi succeeded to install Debian on a Sony
+PlayStation 3 (PS3), which is a 64-bit PowerPC architecture that some GNU/Linux
+distributions and NetBSD already have a port for. Yaegashi set up a wiki <a
+href="http://www.keshi.org/moin/moin.cgi/PS3/Debian/Installer">page</a> that
+describes the installation using a customised version of the <a
+href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer/">debian-installer</a>.</p>
 
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