[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-01.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/13 18:36:41	1.18
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/13 19:13:38	1.19
@@ -101,15 +101,16 @@
 packages or the initramfs system used in Debian.  Any feedback,
 comments, or content proposals are welcome.</p>
 
-<a href="http://www.debian-administration.org">debian-administration.org
-</a> is conducting a poll titled <a
-href="http://www.debian-administration.org/polls/88">I guess
-Etch will release.</a> 45% of people guesses that "etch will be
-released whenever it is ready".
+<p><strong>Anticipating the Release Date.</strong> <a
+href="http://www.debian-administration.org/">Debian Administration</a> is
+conducting a <a href="http://www.debian-administration.org/polls/88">poll</a>
+that allows readers to estimate the release date of <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a>. 45&nbsp;% of its readers assume that
+etch will be released whenever it is ready.
 <a href="http://www.debian-administration.org/users/debianex">debianex</a>
-comments that debian is the most stable distro and because of its
-stability, apt-get and very helpful wide community
-he is using debian and he expects debian to stay at No 1.
+stated that Debian is the most stable distribution and because of its
+stability, <code>apt-get</code> and a very helpful large community
+he is using the system and expects it to stay at No 1.</p>
 
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