[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-02.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/28 12:43:06	1.11
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/28 13:06:23	1.12
@@ -76,15 +76,16 @@
 
 # From: Felipe Augusto van de Wiel <felipe at cathedrallabs.org>
 
-<p><strong>Proposal for an Official Screenshot Repository.</strong>  Roberto C.
+<p><strong>Proposal for an official Screenshot Repository.</strong>  Roberto C.
 Sanchez <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/01/msg00089.html">requested</a>
-comments about the idea of having a service similar to <a
-href="http://packages.debian.org">packages.debian.org</a> that would allow
-people to browse images based on the packages.  Nico Golde <a
+comments about the idea of having an official archive of screenshots that
+would allow users to browse through images of GUI packages, a service similar
+to <a href="http://packages.debian.org">packages.debian.org</a> for descriptions.
+Nico Golde <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/01/msg00091.html">pointed</a>
 a similar <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2006/04/msg00915.html">\
-discussion</a> in 2006.
+discussion</a> in 2006.</p>
 
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