[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-02.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/28 14:26:03	1.19
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-02.wml	2007/01/28 15:03:29	1.20
@@ -122,16 +122,17 @@
 href="http://packages.debian.org/perforate">perforate</a>, a package
 maintained by her.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Updates during etch life cycle.</strong>  Luis Matos <a
+<p><strong>Updates during the Etch Life Cycle.</strong>  Luis Matos <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/01/msg00080.html">\
 proposed</a> to add kernel updates on stable point releases in order to support
-more hardware and keep using <a href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-volatile/">Debian
-Volatile</a> or <a href="http://www.backports.org">backports</a> for other
-programs.  Moritz Muehlenhoff <a
+more hardware and to keep using <a href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-volatile/">\
+volatile</a> and <a href="http://www.backports.org/">backports</a> for other
+programs.  Moritz Mühlenhoff <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/01/msg00094.html">added</a>
-that are plans for a second set of kernels (and probably xservers) nine months
-after the Etch release, which will also have security support. However nothing
-is fixed yet, as the current focus is on getting Etch ready.</p>
+that there are plans for a second set of kernels (and probably X servers) nine
+months after the release of <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a>, which
+will also have security support.  However, nothing
+is fixed yet, as the current focus is on getting etch ready for release.</p>
 
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