[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-01.wml 
Log Message:
Patches by Jens Seidel and other German translators

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/24 18:36:03	1.40
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-01.wml	2007/01/30 20:05:15	1.41
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
 
 <p><strong>French DebianEdu Developers Meeting.</strong> Mathieu Duploy <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/2006/12/msg00160.html">\
-announced</a> the <a
+announced</a> the Debian-Edu <a
 href="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/DevCampFrance2007">developers 
-meeting</a> especially for French the Debian-Edu developers sponsored by <a
+meeting</a> sponsored by <a
 href="http://www.cetril.org/">Centre Européen de Transfert et de Recherche en
 Informatique Libre</a>.  It will take place on February 17th to 24th in
 Soissons (France). Transportation from Soissons to <a
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 architecture which were made for the upcoming release of <a
 href="$(HOME)/releases/etch">etch</a>.  The handbook covers several
 kernel-related topics and tasks like building kernel packages, module
-packages or the initial ram-disk system used in Debian.  Any feedback,
+packages and the initial ram-disk system used in Debian.  Any feedback,
 comments, or content proposals are welcome.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Anticipating the Release Date.</strong> <a
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
 href="$(HOME)/ports/m68k/">m68k</a> port is performing quite well after the
 GCC issues were finally solved by Roman Zippel.  This port is currently in a
 better shape than <a href="$(HOME)/ports/alpha/">alpha</a> and <a
-href="$(HOME)/ports/arm/">arm</a>.  He wondered if  m68k could be a release
+href="$(HOME)/ports/arm/">arm</a>.  He wondered if m68k could be a release
 architecture now, given that <a href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> hasn't
 been released in December.</p>
 
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/396039">Bug#396039</a>:
      Request of maintainer obsoleted by openssh.
 </li>
-<li> clutils &mdash; Development files needed to compile programs that use clutils.
+<li> clutils &mdash; Development files needed to compile programs that use clutils
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/403389">Bug#403389</a>:
      Request of maintainer, obsoleted by ghdl.
 </li>
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/387499">Bug#387499</a>:
      Request of QA, RC-buggy, uninstallable, unmaintained.
 </li>
-<li> kudzu &mdash; The Red Hat Linux hardware probing tool.
+<li> kudzu &mdash; The Red Hat Linux hardware probing tool
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/387638">Bug#387638</a>:
      Request of maintainer, FTBFS, not in etch, obsolete.
 </li>
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/400084">Bug#400084</a>:
      Request of maintainer, superseded by gecko-sharp2, RC-buggy.
 </li>
-<li> lukemftpd &mdash; Enhanced FTP daemon from NetBSD.
+<li> lukemftpd &mdash; Enhanced FTP daemon from NetBSD
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/400281">Bug#400281</a>:
      Request of QA, unmaintained.
 </li>
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> zope-cmfforum &mdash; Forum module for the Zope content management framework
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/400864">Bug#400864</a>:
-     Request of maintainer, unmaintained, does not work current version of Plone in unstable.
+     Request of maintainer, unmaintained, does not work with current version of Plone in unstable.
 </li>
 <li> xnap-snapshot &mdash; Powerful Java filesharing client
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/401139">Bug#401139</a>:
@@ -878,7 +878,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/402587">Bug#402587</a>:
      Request of maintainer, orphaned, unmaintained upstream, RC-buggy, unused.
 </li>
-<li> motifnls &mdash; Files needed to run some Motif applications.
+<li> motifnls &mdash; Files needed to run some Motif applications
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/402774">Bug#402774</a>:
      Request of maintainer, RC-buggy, obsolete.
 </li>
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/401141">Bug#401141</a>:
      Request of QA, Mozilla has gone away.
 </li>
-<li> mozilla-locale-es-es &mdash; Mozilla Spanish Language/Region Package.
+<li> mozilla-locale-es-es &mdash; Mozilla Spanish Language/Region Package
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/401142">Bug#401142</a>:
      Request of QA, Mozilla has gone away.
 </li>