[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-06.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-06.wml	2007/06/01 10:56:29	1.7
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-06.wml	2007/06/01 11:02:48	1.8
@@ -34,12 +34,12 @@
 
 # From: Thomas Bliesener <nospam at melix.com.mx>
 
-<p><strong>Interviews with Sam Hocevar.</strong> The new Debian Project Leader
-was interviewed by <a
+<p><strong>Interviews with Sam Hocevar.</strong> The new Debian project <a
+href="$(HOME)/devel/leader">leader</a> was interviewed by <a
 href="http://www.itwire.com.au/content/view/11654/1090/">itwire</a> and <a
 href="http://www.linux.com/article.pl?sid=07%2F04%2F26%2F1520212">linux.com</a>.
 Sam expressed that he wants to focus on social ascpects like improving the
-internal communication, the teamwork and motivating Ubuntu developers to
+internal communication, teamwork and motivating Ubuntu developers to
 contribute to Debian.  About the GPLv3 discussion he said that most GPLv2
 software in Debian is already GPLv3 compatible and that using the GPLv3 in
 Debian would cause even more license incompatbilities.</p>
@@ -50,16 +50,17 @@
 to create an archive for high quality artwork like wallpaper,
 splashscreens, icons, logos, screenshots or system sounds
 which can be freely used for KDE, GNOME, Xfce or t-shirts and
-labels.  This user contributed artwork can be included in upcoming debian
+labels.  This user contributed artwork can be included in upcoming Debian
 releases.</p>
 
 <p><strong>Removing PHP4.</strong> Sean Finney <a
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/05/msg00126.html">announced</a>
-that PHP4 will be removed from testing/unstable.  Sean has setup a <a
-href="http://wiki.debian.org/PHP4Removal">wiki</a> to give detailed
+that PHP4 will be removed from <a href="$(HOME)/releases/sid/">unstable</a>
+and thus <a href="$(HOME)/releases/testing/">testing</a>.  Sean has setup a Wiki <a
+href="http://wiki.debian.org/PHP4Removal">page</a> to give detailed
 information for packages depending on PHP4 and to track the progress.
-He asked the concerned maintainers to fix their packages to avoid mass
-bugfiling.</p>
+He asked the respective maintainers to fix their packages to avoid mass
+bug filing.</p>
 
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