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[CVS User joey]

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 that the manual contained several custom entities that couldn't be translated
 into other languages.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Bharat Operating System Solutions</strong>.  Chandan M C
+<p><strong>Bharat Operating System Solutions GNU/Linux 1.0.</strong> Chandan M C
 <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-custom/2007/01/msg00065.html">\
-announced</a> the new Indian Version of GNU/Linux named as BOSS GNU/Linux
-(Bharat Operating System Solutions) codenamed as Tarnag and based on Debian
-GNU/Linux 4.0 (codenamed Etch).  The news release is the result of the
-efforts initiated by <a href="http://www.nrcfoss.org.in">NRCFOSS</a> (National
-Resource Centre for Free/OpenSource Software) resided at C-DAC (Centre for
-Development of Advanced Computing) located at Chennai, India.  Debian was
-chosen because of its high versatiluty and reliability as well as the guarantee
-to always remain 100% Free Software.</p>
+announced</a> that the Indian distribution BOSS GNU/Linux 1.0 is based on
+Debian GNU/Linux 4.0.  It consists of a pleasing desktop environment coupled
+with Indian languages support and packages relevant for use in the government.
+The long-term goal is to localise the system into all 22 official Indian
+languages to support people who don't understand English and are thus denied
+Free Software's benefits.  The <a href="http://www.nrcfoss.org.in/">National
+Resource Centre for Free/OpenSource Software</a> chose Debian for its high
+versatility and reliability as well as the guarantee to always remain
+100&nbsp;% Free Software.</p>
 
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