[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-04.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/10 07:28:05	1.32
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/10 07:48:22	1.33
@@ -157,16 +157,16 @@
 after the nomination phase, the campaning phase begun during which
 the candidates will answer questions regarding their plans and ideas.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Debian fully translated into french</strong> Christian
-Perrier <a href=
-"http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/03/msg00068.html">announced</a>
+<p><strong>French Translation of Debian completed.</strong> Christian
+Perrier <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/03/msg00068.html">\
+announced</a>
 that Debian <a href="$(HOME)/releases/unstable">unstable</a> is now
 fully <a href="$(HOME)/intl/l10n/po-debconf/fr">translated</a> into
-french language thanks to the continuous work of the french localisation
-team and the whole <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-i18n/">
-i18n</a> community. That effort is also ongoing for several <a href=
-"$(HOME)/intl/l10n/po-debconf/rank">other languages</a> with a steady
-progress.</p>
+the French language thanks to the continuous work of the French localisation
+team and the whole <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-i18n/">\
+internationalisation</a> community.  A similar effort is also ongoing for
+several <a href="$(HOME)/intl/l10n/po-debconf/rank">other languages</a> with a
+steady progress.</p>
 
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