[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-04.wml 
Log Message:
Corrections by Jens Seidel

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/13 18:06:32	1.41
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-04.wml	2007/03/16 08:09:49	1.42
@@ -168,10 +168,10 @@
 href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-vote/2007/03/msg00240.html">withdrew</a>
 his candidacy.</p>
 
-<p><strong>French Translation of Debian completed.</strong> Christian
+<p><strong>French Debconf Translation of Debian completed.</strong> Christian
 Perrier <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2007/03/msg00068.html">\
 announced</a>
-that Debian <a href="$(HOME)/releases/unstable">unstable</a> is now
+that Debian's Debconf templates in <a href="$(HOME)/releases/unstable">unstable</a> are now
 fully <a href="$(HOME)/intl/l10n/po-debconf/fr">translated</a> into
 the French language thanks to the continuous work of the French localisation
 team and the whole <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-i18n/">\
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
 
 <p><strong>Removed Packages.</strong> 19 packages have been <a
 href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/removals.txt">removed</a> from the Debian
-archive during the past week:</p>
+archive since the last issue:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li> xbox-cromwell &mdash; Xbox BIOS image
@@ -433,7 +433,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> swingwt &mdash; Swing/AWT API over SWT library for development
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/405891">Bug#405891</a>:
-     Request of QA, orphaned, no revdeps, few popcon installs, alternatives available.
+     Request of QA, orphaned, no rev-deps, few popcon installs, alternatives available.
 </li>
 <li> xkeysw &mdash; Keyboard layout switch for the X Window System
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/405893">Bug#405893</a>:
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/406585">Bug#406585</a>:
      Request of QA, superseded by autopkgtest.
 </li>
-<li> mozilla-firefox-locale-all &mdash; Arabic language package for Firefox
+<li> mozilla-firefox-locale-all &mdash; All languages package for Firefox
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/407523">Bug#407523</a>:
      Request of maintainer, superseded by iceweasel-l10n.
 </li>
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@
 </li>
 <li> gnomemeeting &mdash; GnomeMeeting Voice Over IP Suite
      <br><a href="http://bugs.debian.org/413280">Bug#413280</a>:
-     obsoleted by ekiga, request of security team.
+     Request of security team, obsoleted by ekiga.
 </li>
 </ul>