[Dwn-trans-commit] CVS public_html/src/Writing/DWN

[CVS User joey]

Update of /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN
In directory finlandia:/home/users/joey/Projects/Web/public_html/src/Writing/DWN

Modified Files:
	dwn-2007-05.wml 
Log Message:
Polishing

--- /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-05.wml	2007/03/27 07:59:28	1.11
+++ /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2007-05.wml	2007/03/27 08:57:44	1.12
@@ -48,17 +48,16 @@
 href="http://glibc-bsd.alioth.debian.org/install-cd/kfreebsd-amd64/20070313/">\
 amd64</a> platforms.</p>
 
-<p><strong>Debian Installer for Etch RC2 released</strong> Frans Pop,
-member of the <a href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer">Debian
-Installer</a> team <a href=
-"http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2007/03/msg00016.html">
-announced</a> the availability of the second and probably last release
-candidate of the debian-installer for the upcoming <a href=
-"$(HOME)/releases/etch">etch</a> release. It offers a lot of improvments
- compared to previous versions like broder hardware support with Linux
-2.6.18 kernel, resizing Windows Vista NTFS partitions and a
-high-contrast theme for visually impaired people. With this release
-there are also new sets of CD and DVD images, like a KDE-only one or a
+<p><strong>Debian-Installer for Etch RC2 released.</strong> Frans Pop <a
+href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2007/03/msg00016.html">\
+announced</a> the second and probably last release
+candidate of the <a href="$(HOME)/devel/debian-installer/">debian-installer</a> for the upcoming <a
+href="$(HOME)/releases/etch/">etch</a> release. It offers a lot of improvments
+such as broader hardware support thanks to Linux
+2.6.18, the possibility to resize Windows Vista NTFS partitions, and a
+high-contrast theme for visually impaired people.  It is available on new
+additional sets of CD and DVD images with KDE or Xfce respectively
+instead of GNOME, and on a
 multi-architecture DVD for i386, amd64 and powerpc which also includes
 source packages.</p>