[Dwn-trans-english] Remarks to DWN 2004/08

[Jens Seidel]

Hi,

This is the first posting to this mailing list, which was created to
collect bugs and for remarks to DWN.

I finally finished translation of DWN 2004/08 into German. I will not
touch this file agian, Frank it's your turn.

I don't understand "two-up" in
"Postscript utilities for two-up printing, bbox, etc.". I know that
bbox stands for bounding box but what about 2-up?
Does this stand for level 2, 3, ... Postscript?

I had problems to find "recon" in my dictionary. First I assumed it's
an abbreviation for "reconnect" but it stands for "reconnaissance".
I hope this is useful for someone.

It follows a patch to Joey's DWN. I will not mail him!

Index: dwn-2004-08.wml
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RCS file: /var/cvs/infodrom.org/public_html/src/Writing/DWN/dwn-2004-08.wml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.10 dwn-2004-08.wml
--- dwn-2004-08.wml	23 Feb 2004 15:49:12 -0000	1.10
+++ dwn-2004-08.wml	23 Feb 2004 18:31:56 -0000
@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@
 
 <p><strong>Report from Solutions Linux.</strong> Julien Blache wrote a <a
 href="$(HOME)/events/2004/0203-solutionslinux-report">report</a> about this
-years' <a href="$(HOME)/events/2004/0203-solutionslinux">Solution Linux</a>
+years' <a href="$(HOME)/events/2004/0203-solutionslinux">Solutions Linux</a>
 exhibition and conference in France.  Several Debian developers met at the
-Debian booth inside the .Org pavillon and were even intervewed by a French web
+Debian booth inside the .Org pavilion and were even interviewed by a French web
 radio about Debian in general and the upcoming release of sarge.  The number
 of interested visitors at the booth also increased, compared to past
 events.</p>
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/libdevel/pm-dev">pm-dev</a>
     -- Proxy management protocol development files.
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/proxycheck">proxycheck</a>
-    -- simple tool to quickly recon a running open proxy server.
+    -- Simple tool to quickly recon a running open proxy server.
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/net/pvpgn">pvpgn</a>
     -- Gaming server that emulates Battle.net(R).
 <li><a href="http://packages.debian.org/unstable/x11/rapidsvn">rapidsvn</a>

Jens