[Fai-commit] r4348 - in trunk: conf doc examples/simple/class examples/simple/scripts/FAIBASE man

lange at alioth.debian.org lange at alioth.debian.org
Thu Jun 14 20:54:15 UTC 2007


Author: lange
Date: 2007-06-14 20:54:15 +0000 (Thu, 14 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 4348

Modified:
   trunk/conf/sources.list
   trunk/doc/fai-guide.sgml
   trunk/examples/simple/class/10-base-classes
   trunk/examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source
   trunk/examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var
   trunk/examples/simple/scripts/FAIBASE/20-removable_media
   trunk/man/fai-chboot.8
   trunk/man/install_packages.8
Log:
add some minor patches fixing english text, fix /floppy path (closes: #428857, #428858, #428859) 


Modified: trunk/conf/sources.list
===================================================================
--- trunk/conf/sources.list	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/conf/sources.list	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # These lines should work for many sites
-# A more comprehensive example can be found in /usr/share/doc/fai/examples/etc
+# A more comprehensive example is at /usr/share/doc/fai-doc/examples/etc
 
 deb http://ftp.debian.org/debian etch main contrib non-free
 #deb http://ftp.debian.org/debian etch-proposed-updates main contrib non-free

Modified: trunk/doc/fai-guide.sgml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc/fai-guide.sgml	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/doc/fai-guide.sgml	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -1374,9 +1374,9 @@
 <p>
 
 The installation script uses many subroutines, which are defined in
-<file>/usr/share/fai/subroutines</file>, and an operating system specific
-file <footnote><file>/usr/share/fai/subroutines-linux</file> for Linux,
-<file>/usr/share/fai/subroutines-sunos</file> for Solaris.</footnote>.
+<file>/usr/lib/fai/subroutines</file>, and an operating system specific
+file <footnote><file>/usr/lib/fai/subroutines-linux</file> for Linux,
+<file>/usr/lib/fai/subroutines-sunos</file> for Solaris.</footnote>.
 All important tasks of the
 installation are called via the subroutine <tt>task</tt>
 appended by the name of the task as an option (e.g. <tt>task

Modified: trunk/examples/simple/class/10-base-classes
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/simple/class/10-base-classes	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/examples/simple/class/10-base-classes	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #! /bin/bash
 
-# echo architecture and OS name in upper case. Do NOT remove these two lines
+# Echo architecture and OS name in uppercase. Do NOT remove these two lines.
 uname -s | tr '[:lower:]' '[:upper:]'
 [ -x "`which dpkg`" ] && dpkg --print-installation-architecture | tr a-z A-Z
 

Modified: trunk/examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/examples/simple/class/20-hwdetect.source	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 # (c) Thomas Lange, 2002-2005, lange at informatik.uni-koeln.de
 
-# NOTE: Files named *.source will be evaluated, but their output ignored and instead 
+# NOTE: Files named *.source will be evaluated, but their output ignored. Instead
 # the contents of $newclasses will be added to the list of defined classes.
 
 echo 0 > /proc/sys/kernel/printk
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 for i in $mod; do
     modprobe $i 1>/dev/null 2>&1
 done
-# Booting from CD does not enable dma always
+# Booting from CD does not always enable DMA.
 for d in $( echo /proc/ide/hd[a-z] 2>/dev/null); do
     [ -d $d ] && echo "using_dma:1" > $d/settings
 done
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 # let discover do most of the job
 [ -x /sbin/discover-modprobe ] && /sbin/discover-modprobe
 
-# now we can mount the usb file system
+# now we can mount the USB filesystem
 mount -t usbfs  usbfs /proc/bus/usb
 
 modprobe -a sd_mod sr_mod
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 echo 6 > /proc/sys/kernel/printk
 
 # try to detect graphics card
-# the variable VIDEODRIVER may be used to generate the XF86config file
+# the variable VIDEODRIVER may be used to generate the xorg.conf file
 [ -x "$(which discover)" ] && {
     if discover --version | grep "discover \(version \)*1\." ; then
 	VIDEODRIVER=$(discover --xdriver video 2> /dev/null)

Modified: trunk/examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/examples/simple/class/FAIBASE.var	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # default values for installation. You can override them in your *.var files
 
-# allow installation of pacakges from unsigned repositories
+# allow installation of packages from unsigned repositories
 FAI_ALLOW_UNSIGNED=1
 
 CONSOLEFONT=
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 # pw is "fai"
 ROOTPW='$1$kBnWcO.E$djxB128U7dMkrltJHPf6d1'
 
-# moduleslist contains modules that will be loaded by the new system,
+# MODULESLIST contains modules that will be loaded by the new system,
 # not during installation these modules will be written to /etc/modules
 # If you need a module during installation, add it to $kernelmodules
 # in 20-hwdetect.source. But discover should do most of this job

Modified: trunk/examples/simple/scripts/FAIBASE/20-removable_media
===================================================================
--- trunk/examples/simple/scripts/FAIBASE/20-removable_media	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/examples/simple/scripts/FAIBASE/20-removable_media	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 # (c) Thomas Lange, 2006, lange at debian.org
 # create entries for removable media in fstab and directories in /media
 
-ainsl $target/etc/fstab "/dev/fd0  /floppy  auto  users,noauto 0 0"
+ainsl $target/etc/fstab "/dev/fd0  /media/floppy  auto  users,noauto 0 0"
 
 cdromlist() {
     [ -f /proc/sys/dev/cdrom/info ] || return

Modified: trunk/man/fai-chboot.8
===================================================================
--- trunk/man/fai-chboot.8	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/man/fai-chboot.8	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 verbose,sshd,createvt
 .TP
 .B \-h
-Show simle help and version.
+Show simple help and version.
 .TP
 .B \-i
 Set parameters for booting the FAI install kernel. Same as -k "ip=dhcp" vmlinuz-install /dev/nfs. This does not set FAI_ACTION.
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 .B \-I
 Same as -i but also sets FAI_ACTION=install. So a fully automatic
 installation will be performed. ATTENTION! This will erase most of the
-data on the install clients local disks.
+data on the local disks of the install clients.
 .TP
 .BI "\-k " parameters
 Set kernel append parameters.

Modified: trunk/man/install_packages.8
===================================================================
--- trunk/man/install_packages.8	2007-06-14 10:25:09 UTC (rev 4347)
+++ trunk/man/install_packages.8	2007-06-14 20:54:15 UTC (rev 4348)
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 remove, or purge packages or tasks.
 
 install_packages is called from the custom fai_rcS script and should not be
-called directly.  It's function is to parse the package_config files based on
+called directly.  Its function is to parse the package_config files based on
 the class definitions of the client.  For example, if the client belonged to
 the SMTPSERVER class, install_packages would parse ../package_config/SMTPSERVER
 for instructions on what packages to install, hold, remove, or purge.




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