[Glibc-bsd-commits] r1632 - in trunk/web: . doc

Tue Jul 25 04:59:02 UTC 2006

Author: penix-guest
Date: 2006-07-25 04:59:02 +0000 (Tue, 25 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 1632

Removed:
   trunk/web/test/
Modified:
   trunk/web/doc/index.html
   trunk/web/doc/installing.html
Log:
Quick random cleanup

Modified: trunk/web/doc/index.html
===================================================================

--- trunk/web/doc/index.html	2006-07-25 00:24:51 UTC (rev 1631)
+++ trunk/web/doc/index.html	2006-07-25 04:59:02 UTC (rev 1632)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 <li><a href="installing.html">Installing</a></li>
 <ul>
 <li><a href="installing.html#pre">Pre-installation notes</a></li>
-<li><a href="installing.html#base">Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD</a></li>
+<li><a href="installing.html#base">Installing the base system</a></li>
 <li><a href="installing.html#grub">Boot loader</a></li>
 </ul>
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 
 </table>
 
-<p></p><br>
+<p></p>
 
 <hr align="center" width="70%">
 <table width="70%" border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0">
@@ -73,4 +73,4 @@
 
 </center>
 </body>
-</html>
\ No newline at end of file
+</html>

Modified: trunk/web/doc/installing.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/installing.html	2006-07-25 00:24:51 UTC (rev 1631)
+++ trunk/web/doc/installing.html	2006-07-25 04:59:02 UTC (rev 1632)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <html>
 <head>
-<title>Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD - Installing</title>
+<title>Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD - Installing the base system</title>
 </head>
 <body bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000" link="#0000ff" alink="#0000ff" vlink="#880088">
 <center>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 <tr>
 <td width="10%" align="left" valign="bottom"><a href="sysreq.html">Prev</a></td>
 
-<td width="80%" align="center" valign="bottom">Installing</td>
+<td width="80%" align="center" valign="bottom">Installing the base system</td>
 
 <td width="10%" align="right" valign="bottom"><a href="post.html">Next</a></td>
 </tr>
@@ -28,8 +28,7 @@
 
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
-<p><b>Important</b> - Make sure you've read <a href="sysreq.html#media">"Installation media"</a> before you continue. 
-It contains important information.
+<p>Download information for the install CD can be found in <a href="sysreq.html#media">"Installation media"</a>. 
 
 </p>
 </td>
@@ -37,31 +36,32 @@
 
 <tr>
 <th colspan="3" align="left">
-<a name="base"></a><font color="#990000"><h3>Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD</h3></font></th>
+<a name="base"></a><font color="#990000"><h3>Installing the base system</h3></font></th>
 </tr>
 
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
-<p>
 
 <p>Insert the Debian GNU/kFreeBSD installation CD and boot your computer from it.</p>
 
 <p>Once the CD is finished booting, you should be presented with an installation menu.</p>
 
-<p>Select either Custom or Express install.  <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>Do NOT select Standard installation</i></b></font> because this will leave you with a broken system.</p>
+<p>Select either <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>Custom</b></i></font> or <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>Express</b></i></font> install. 
+<br><font color="#ff0000">Important</font> - <b>Do NOT select Standard installation</i></b></font> or you will be left with a broken system.</p>
 
-<p>You will now be asked to create your partitions (if you're unsure, a simple / partition and swap is fine).</p>
+<p>You will now be asked to create your partitions (if you're unsure, a simple / partition and swap is fine).
+For more information on partitioning with FreeBSD, see <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-steps.html">this</a> 
+page of the FreeBSD handbook.</p>
 
-<p>For more information on partitioning with FreeBSD, see <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-steps.html">this</a>
- page of the FreeBSD handbook.</p>
 
-
 <p>After you've finished creating the necessary partitions, you will be asked to install a boot manager.
-<br>GRUB can load kFreeBSD via /boot/loader, so if you're going to be using GRUB as your boot loader,</p>
+GRUB is capable of loading the FreeBSD kernel via /boot/loader, so if you've decided to use GRUB as your boot loader, 
+you'll need to do the following.</p>
 
-<p>Select <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>"None - Leave the master boot record untouched"</i></b></font>.</p>
+<p>Select <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>"None - Leave the master boot record untouched"</i></b></font>.
 
-<br>Otherwise install FreeBSD bootloader to MBR as normal.</p>
+<p>Otherwise, if you don't have an existing bootloader or don't want to use GRUB, install the FreeBSD loader 
+to the MBR as usual. See <a href="installing.html#grub">"Boot loader"</a> for more information on booting with GRUB</p>
 
 <p>When you are at the <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>"Choose distributions"</i></b></font> 
 screen, select <font color="#461b7e"><b><i>"Minimal"</i></b></font>.


