[Glibc-bsd-commits] r1963 - trunk/web/doc

Fri Jun 29 10:50:15 UTC 2007

Author: penix-guest
Date: 2007-06-29 10:50:15 +0000 (Fri, 29 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 1963

Modified:
   trunk/web/doc/index.html
   trunk/web/doc/installing.html
   trunk/web/doc/intro.html
   trunk/web/doc/post.html
   trunk/web/doc/resources.html
   trunk/web/doc/sysreq.html
Log:
* Install doc update/cleanup.

Modified: trunk/web/doc/index.html
===================================================================

--- trunk/web/doc/index.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/index.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 <p></p>
 <li><a href="installing.html">Installing</a></li>
 <ul>
-<li><a href="installing.html#pre">Pre-installation notes</a></li>
+<li><a href="installing.html#pre">Obtaining install CD</a></li>
 <li><a href="installing.html#base">Installing the base system</a></li>
 <li><a href="installing.html#grub">Boot loader</a></li>
 </ul>

Modified: trunk/web/doc/installing.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/installing.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/installing.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -23,12 +23,13 @@
 <table width="70%" border="0" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0">
 
 <tr>
-<th colspan="3" align="left"><a name="pre"></a><font color="#990000"><h3>Pre-installation notes</h3></font></th>
+<th colspan="3" align="left"><a name="pre"></a><font color="#990000"><h3>Obtaining the installation CD</h3></font></th>
 </tr>
 
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
-<p>Download information for the install CD can be found in <a href="sysreq.html#media">"Installation media"</a>. 
+<p>The installation CD can be downloaded from <a href="http://glibc-bsd.alioth.debian.org/install-cd/">here</a>.
+<br>See <a href="sysreq.html#media">"Installation media"</a> for more information.
 
 </p>
 </td>

Modified: trunk/web/doc/intro.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/intro.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/intro.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@
 that consists of the GNU userland, GNU C library, Debian package management (dpkg, apt etc.) and 
 system tools, on top of the <a href="http://www.freebsd.org">FreeBSD</a> kernel.</p>
 
-<p>Although some bugs still exist, Debian GNU/kFreeBSD is a very functional system.
-The Debian base packages have been ported/built and desktop components such as 
-X.Org and GNOME are up and running.
-<br>Versions 5.x and 6.x of the FreeBSD kernel are currently supported.</p>
+<p>Although some bugs still exist, Debian GNU/kFreeBSD is a very complete and usable system.
+Supported desktop environments include GNOME, KDE and Xfce, among others.
+The FreeBSD 6.x kernel is currently in use as the default system and installer kernel.
+Packages of the older 5.x series kernel are also available, as well as occasional 7-CURRENT snapshots.
 
-<p>At the time of writing, Debian GNU/kFreeBSD is available the i386 and amd64 architectures and it
-supports (roughly) the same hardware supported by FreeBSD.
+<p>Debian GNU/kFreeBSD is currently available for the i386 and amd64 architectures and 
+generally supports the same hardware that a normal FreeBSD release would.
 </p>
 
 </td>
@@ -59,4 +59,4 @@
 </table>
 
 </body>
-</html>
\ No newline at end of file
+</html>

Modified: trunk/web/doc/post.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/post.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/post.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 <td width="70%" align="left">
 <p>
 When building packages make sure you have the latest autotools-dev package installed. 
-<br>Many packages have outdated config.* files. See <a href="/porting/PORTING">PORTING</a> for more information.
+Many packages have outdated config.* files. See <a href="/porting/PORTING">PORTING</a> for more information.
 
 </p>
 

Modified: trunk/web/doc/resources.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/resources.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/resources.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -76,7 +76,8 @@
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
 <p>
-Any comments or complaints about this guide can be directed to Joshua Cummings at <a href="mailto:jrac at tsn.cc">jrac at tsn.cc</a>.
+Any comments or complaints about this guide can be directed to Joshua Cummings 
+(<i>jrac at internode.on.net</i>) via the mailing list.
 
 </p>
 

Modified: trunk/web/doc/sysreq.html
===================================================================
--- trunk/web/doc/sysreq.html	2007-06-26 20:06:03 UTC (rev 1962)
+++ trunk/web/doc/sysreq.html	2007-06-29 10:50:15 UTC (rev 1963)
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@
 
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
-<p>
-Debian GNU/kFreeBSD runs on the i386 (i486 or later) and amd64 architectures.  It supports (roughly) the same
-hardware that FreeBSD does. See <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-supported-hardware.html">"Supported hardware"</a> 
+<p>At the time of writing, Debian GNU/kFreeBSD is available for the i386 and amd64 architectures and 
+features hardware support roughly equivalent to FreeBSD/i386 or FreeBSD/amd64, respectively. 
+See <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-supported-hardware.html">"Supported hardware"</a> 
 in the <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/">FreeBSD handbook</a> for details.
 </p>
 </td>
@@ -43,13 +43,14 @@
 
 <tr>
 <td width="70%" align="left">
-<p>We have an installation CD that is similar in functionality to the debian-installer "netinst" flavour.  Note,
-however, that debian-installer is not ported yet, so our install CD is actualy using the FreeBSD installer (if
+<p>Our custom installation CD is similar in functionality to the debian-installer "netinst" flavour.
+Be aware that despite this fact, a port of the official debian-installer to GNU/kFreeBSD has not yet 
+been completed. In the mean time our install CD is based on the regular FreeBSD installer (aka sysinstall. If
 you have installed FreeBSD before, this will look suspiciously familiar).</p>
 
-<p>You can find releases of our install CD <a href="../install-cd">here</a>.</p>
+<p>Releases of our install CD can be found in the <a href="../install-cd">install-cd/</a> directory of this site.</p>
 
-<p>For information on how to proceed, check <a href="installing.html#base">"Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD"</a> section.</p>
+<p>For information on how to install, proceed to <a href="installing.html#base">"Installing Debian GNU/kFreeBSD"</a>.</p>
 
 </td>
 </tr>


