[l10n-russian CVS] release-notes/sgml release-notes.en.sgml, 1.22, 1.23

Yuri Kozlov yuray-guest at alioth.debian.org
Tue Apr 17 17:31:27 UTC 2007


Update of /cvsroot/l10n-russian/release-notes/sgml
In directory alioth:/tmp/cvs-serv13448/sgml

Modified Files:
	release-notes.en.sgml 
Log Message:
uploaded to upstream

Index: release-notes.en.sgml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/l10n-russian/release-notes/sgml/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -d -r1.22 -r1.23
--- release-notes.en.sgml	9 Apr 2007 16:44:53 -0000	1.22
+++ release-notes.en.sgml	17 Apr 2007 17:31:25 -0000	1.23
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@
 
         <p>The most recent version of this document is always available at <url
         id="&url-release-notes;">. If the version you are reading is more than a
-        month old<footnote>as listed on the front page of the PDF version and in
-        the footer of the online HTML version</footnote>, you might wish to obtain
+        month old<footnote>As listed on the front page of the PDF version and in
+        the footer of the HTML version.</footnote>, you might wish to obtain
         the latest version.</p>
 
         <p>Please note that we only support and document upgrading from the
@@ -65,9 +65,11 @@
         <p>We welcome any information from users related to upgrades from
         &oldreleasename; to &releasename;. If you are willing to share information
         please file a bug in the <url id="&url-bts;" name="bug tracking system">
-        against the <package>upgrade-reports</package> package with your results.</p>
+        against the <package>upgrade-reports</package> package with your results.
+        We request that you compress any attachments that are included (using
+        <prgn/gzip/).</p>
 
-        <p>Please provide the following information when submitting your upgrade report:
+        <p>Please include the following information when submitting your upgrade report:
 
         <list>
 
@@ -81,16 +83,16 @@
             but you can also find backups of this information in
             <file>/var/backups</file>.</p></item>
 
-            <item><p>Session logs using <package>script</package>, as described in
+            <item><p>Session logs using <prgn/script/, as described in
 	    <ref id="record_session">.</p></item>
 
-            <item><p>Your aptitude logs, available at <file>/var/log/aptitude</file>.</p></item>
+            <item><p>Your <prgn/aptitude/ logs, available at <file>/var/log/aptitude</file>.</p></item>
 
         </list></p>
 
         <p>Note: you should take some time to review and remove any sensitive and/or confidential
         information from the logs before including them in a bug report as the information
-        will be published in a public database.
+        will be published in a public database.</p>
 
         </sect>
 
@@ -261,7 +263,7 @@
 
            <p>&debian; again ships with several desktop applications and environments.
            Among others it now includes the desktop environments GNOME
-           2.14<footnote>with some modules from GNOME 2.16</footnote>, KDE 3.5.5a,
+           2.14<footnote>With some modules from GNOME 2.16.</footnote>, KDE 3.5.5a,
            and Xfce 4.4. Productivity applications have also been upgraded,
            including the office suites OpenOffice.org 2.0.4a and KOffice 1.6 as
            well as GNUcash 2.0.5, GNUmeric 1.6.3 and Abiword 2.4.6.</p>
@@ -282,7 +284,7 @@
 
            <item>the GNU Compiler Collection 4.1 as default compiler</item>
 
-           <item>language interpreters: PHP 5.2, Python 2.4</item>
+           <item>language interpreters: Python 2.4, PHP 5.2</item>
 
            <item>server software:
 
@@ -2518,10 +2520,20 @@
           <p>
           Since 2.6.17, Linux aggressively uses TCP window scaling which is specified in RFC 1323.
           Some servers have a broken behavior, and announce wrong
-          window sizes for themselves. Please see the bugs
-          <url id="http://bugs.debian.org/381262" name="#381262"> and
-          <url id="http://bugs.debian.org/395066" name="#395066">
-          for more information.
+          window sizes for themselves.
+          For more details, please see the bug reports
+          <url id="http://bugs.debian.org/381262" name="#381262">,
+          <url id="http://bugs.debian.org/395066" name="#395066">,
+          <url id="http://bugs.debian.org/401435" name="#401435">.
+          </p>
+
+          <p>
+          There are usually two workarounds to these problems: either revert
+          the maximum allowed TCP window sizes to a smaller value (preferable)
+          or turn off TCP window scaling altogether (deprecated).
+          See the example commands in the
+          <url id="http://www.debian.org/devel/debian-installer/errata"
+               name="debian-installer errata page">.
           </p>
           </sect1>
 
@@ -3142,18 +3154,20 @@
         check the archives for answers to your question prior to posting and
         also adhere to standard list etiquette.</p>
       </sect1>
-<!-- TODO: Changed to OFTC -->
+
       <sect1 id="irc">
         <heading>Internet Relay Chat</heading>
 
         <p>Debian has an IRC channel dedicated to the support and aid of
-        Debian users located on the OFTC IRC network which exists to
-        provide interactive services to peer-directed project communities.
+        Debian users located on the OFTC IRC network.
         To access the channel, point your favorite IRC client at
         &debian-irc-server; and join #debian.</p>
 
         <p>Please follow the channel guidelines, respecting other users
-        fully. For more information on OFTC please visit the <url
+        fully. The guidelines are available at the
+        <url id="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianIRC" name="Debian Wiki">.</p>
+
+        <p>For more information on OFTC please visit the <url
         id="&url-irc-host;" name="website">.</p>
 
       </sect1>




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