[l10n-russian CVS] release-notes/sgml release-notes.en.sgml, 1.11, 1.12

Yuri Kozlov yuray-guest at alioth.debian.org
Thu Mar 29 18:59:18 CET 2007


Update of /cvsroot/l10n-russian/release-notes/sgml
In directory alioth:/tmp/cvs-serv25857/sgml

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	release-notes.en.sgml 
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Index: release-notes.en.sgml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/l10n-russian/release-notes/sgml/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -d -r1.11 -r1.12
--- release-notes.en.sgml	28 Mar 2007 18:06:03 -0000	1.11
+++ release-notes.en.sgml	29 Mar 2007 17:59:16 -0000	1.12
@@ -120,9 +120,12 @@
         <p>This release adds official support for the AMD64 architecture which
         supports 64-bit processors from both Intel (EM64T) and AMD (AMD64).
         During the previous release, &debian; 3.1 ('sarge'), an unofficial
-        version of this port was available. Upgrading from this unofficial
-        version should be possible using these Release Notes, but is not
-        supported.</p>
+        version of this port was available.
+<![ %amd64 [
+        Upgrading from this unofficial version should be possible using these
+        Release Notes, but is not supported.
+]]>
+	</p>
 
         <p>Official support for the Motorola 680x0 ('m68k') architecture has been
         dropped because it did not meet the criteria set by the Debian Release
@@ -194,12 +197,12 @@
 
            <p>&debian; again ships with several desktop applications and environments. Amongst
            others it now includes the desktop environments GNOME 2.14<footnote>With some modules from
-           GNOME 2.16</footnote>, KDE 3.5.5a, and Xfce 4.4. Productivity applications
+           GNOME 2.16.</footnote>, KDE 3.5.5a, and Xfce 4.4. Productivity applications
            have also been upgraded, including the office suites OpenOffice.org 2.0.4a and
            KOffice 1.6 as well as GNUcash 2.0.5, GNUmeric 1.6.3 and Abiword 2.4.6</p>
 
            <p>Updates to other desktop applications include the upgrade of
-           Evolution 2.6.3 and Gaim 2.0.  The Mozilla suite has also been updated
+           Evolution 2.6.3 and Gaim 2.0.  The Mozilla suite has also been updated,
            but the main programs have been renamed: <prgn>iceweasel</prgn>
            (version 2.0.0.2) is the unbranded <prgn>Firefox</prgn> web browser
            and <prgn/icedove/ (version 1.5) is the unbranded <prgn/Thunderbird/
@@ -213,9 +216,9 @@
 
            <item>the GNU Compiler Collection 4.1 as default compiler.</item>
 
-           <item>Language interpreters: PHP 5.5, Python 2.4.</item>
+           <item>language interpreters: PHP 5.5, Python 2.4.</item>
 
-           <item>Server software:
+           <item>server software:
 
            <p><list>
            <item>e-mail servers: Exim 4.63 (default email server
@@ -246,7 +249,7 @@
            If you are still using <prgn/dselect/, you should switch to
            <package/aptitude/ as the official frontend for package management.</p>
 
-           <p>The official &debian; distribution now ships on thirteen to fifteen
+           <p>The official &debian; distribution now ships on 19 to 23
            binary CDs (depending on the architecture) and a similar number of
            source CDs. A DVD version of the distribution is also available.</p>
 
@@ -255,7 +258,7 @@
         <sect1 id="secureapt"><heading>Secure APT</heading>
 
 <!-- FIXME: More content needed here? -->
-           <p><prgn/apt-secure/ (also known as <em/Secure APT/ is now available
+           <p><prgn/apt-secure/ (also known as <em/Secure APT/) is now available
            in &releasename;. This feature adds extra security to &debian;
            systems by easily supporting strong cryptography and digital
            signatures to validate downloaded packages. This release includes
@@ -266,7 +269,7 @@
            <p>In its default configuration, <prgn>apt-secure</prgn> will
            warn if packages are downloaded from sources that are not authenticated.
            Future releases might force all packages to be verified before downloading
-           them. Unofficial apt sources administrators are encouraged to
+           them. Administrators of unofficial apt repositories are encouraged to
            generate a cryptographic key and sign their Release files, as well
            as providing a secure way to distribute their public keys.</p>
 
@@ -506,7 +509,7 @@
         </example></p>
 
 	<p>You may also want to check the <url id="&url-installer;index#errata"
-	name="errata"> for debian-installer for a list of knonw issues.</p>
+	name="errata"> for debian-installer for a list of known issues.</p>
 
 <![ %alpha [
         <!-- TODO: Still true? -->
@@ -665,6 +668,13 @@
           backup may help to restore or recreate the old settings. You may
           also want to inform users about this.</p>
 
+          <p>Any package installation operation must be run with superuser
+          privileges, so either login as root or use <prgn/su/ or
+          <prgn/sudo/ to gain the necessary access rights.</p>
+
+          <p>The upgrade has a few preconditions; you should check them
+          before actually executing the upgrade.</p>
+
        </sect1>
 
        <sect1><heading>Inform users in advance</heading>
@@ -720,15 +730,6 @@
           <!-- TODO: surely gdm/kdm are sane? -->
        </sect1>
 
-          <p>Any package installation operation must be run with superuser
-          privileges, so either login as root or use <prgn/su/ or
-          <prgn/sudo/ to gain the necessary access rights.</p>
-
-          <p>The upgrade has a few preconditions; you should check them
-          before actually executing the upgrade.</p>
-
-       </sect1>
-
        <sect1><heading>Review actions pending in package manager</heading>
 
        <P>TODO</p>
@@ -1547,7 +1548,7 @@
           definitions at
           <file>/etc/udev/rules.d/z25_persistent-net.rules</file><footnote>
           The rules there are automatically generated to have persistent names for network
-          interfaces</footnote>. Both alternatives (<prgn>ifrename</prgn>
+          interfaces.</footnote>. Both alternatives (<prgn>ifrename</prgn>
           and <prgn>udev</prgn>) should not be used at the same time. 
           </p>
 
@@ -1837,7 +1838,7 @@
           Certain models of HP laptops have an ACPI BIOS that is incompatible with the
           Linux 2.6.18 kernel shipped in &releasename;, which would prevent the fans from
           spinning up leading to unnecessary heat stress. Also, fans might not work after
-          the system is suspedend. The kernel therefore disables ACPI support
+          the system is suspended. The kernel therefore disables ACPI support
           internally when it detects certain ACPI BIOS versions.  Models known
           to be affected by this change include the HP nx6125, nx6120, nx6325,
           nc6120 and nc6000 models.




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