[Nm-templates-discuss] templates nm_assigned.txt,1.25,1.26

[myon at alioth.debian.org]

Update of /cvsroot/nm-templates/templates
In directory alioth:/tmp/cvs-serv16348

Modified Files:
	nm_assigned.txt 
Log Message:
some fixes suggested by zobel

Index: nm_assigned.txt
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RCS file: /cvsroot/nm-templates/templates/nm_assigned.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -d -r1.25 -r1.26
--- nm_assigned.txt	30 Dec 2006 16:27:30 -0000	1.25
+++ nm_assigned.txt	24 Jan 2007 17:51:35 -0000	1.26
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
 to learn more about the web of trust and key signing.
 
 Please send me the keyid of your OpenPGP public key so I can fetch it
-from a keyserver. If your OpenPGP key is not on a public keyserver, please
-upload it to subkeys.pgp.net. If your OpenPGP key is signed by a Debian
-developer, the ID check is completed. However, if your key is not
+from a keyserver. If your OpenPGP key is not on a public keyserver,
+please upload it to subkeys.pgp.net. If your OpenPGP key is signed by a
+Debian developer, the ID check is completed. However, if your key is not
 signed, then we have to figure out what to do for the ID check. Usually
 I can find someone that lives near you that would agree to meet you and
 sign your key.
@@ -98,16 +98,16 @@
 about the package check and a place where you can upload it.
 
 A thing I should mention: I will ask you a lot of questions in this
-process. This is not torture you, it is to check your knowledge and to
-point you into the right directions where you may miss something at the
-moment. After all the questions were developed in the last few years
-and every little one has an own reason why it is there.
-Yes, i must admit that some are not so easy to solve, but normally a bit
-of thinking mixed with google and the pointers I give in the various
-next mails should help you, so I simply expect you can answer all of
-them. But before you die over one of it -- come back and talk with me, I
-can give you some hints. After all, the process should enhance your
-knowledge and should not make your life too tough.
+process. This is not to torture you, it is to check your knowledge and
+to point you into the right directions where you may miss something at
+the moment. After all the questions were developed in the last few
+years and every little one has an own reason why it is there. Some are
+not so easy to solve, but normally a bit of thinking mixed with google
+and the pointers I give in the various next mails should help you, so
+I simply expect you can answer all of them. But before you die over
+one of it -- come back and talk with me, I can give you some hints.
+After all, the process should enhance your knowledge and should not
+make your life too tough.
 
 I look forward to hearing from you and hope we will be able to go
 through the steps without any problems. The next step is "Philosophy
@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@
 Finally, thanks for volunteering! Debian is a volunteer effort and
 you can make a difference!
 
-Note: If you ever need more than 2 weeks for an answer of a mail,
-please inform me about the delay. If delays are long or frequent, I
-may put you on hold until you have time to complete the process. This
-is not a bad thing, it just allows me to take on other applicants
-during the time you're busy.
+Note: If you ever need more than 2 weeks for an answer of a mail (e.g.
+if you are on vacation or otherwise busy), please inform me about the
+delay. If delays are long or frequent, I may put you on hold until you
+have time to complete the process. This is not a bad thing, it just
+allows me to take on other applicants during the time you're busy.