[Openstack-devel] Bug#708658: [BTS#708658] templates://cinder/{cinder-common.templates, cinder-api.templates} : Final update for English review

[Christian PERRIER]

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, May 21, 2013, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for cinder.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the final proposed changes are attached to this update to the
original bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading cinder with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Tuesday, June 18, 2013, when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Tuesday, July 09, 2013. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Wednesday, July 10, 2013, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


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# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: cinder/start_services
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Start Cinder services at boot?
 Please choose whether you want to start Cinder services when the
 machine is booted up.

Template: cinder/configure_db
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Set up a database for Cinder?
 No database has been set up for Cinder to use. Before
 continuing, you should make sure you have the following information:
 .
  * the type of database that you want to use;
  * the database server hostname (that server must allow TCP connections from this
    machine);
  * a username and password to access the database.
 .
 If some of these requirements are missing, do not choose this option and run with
 regular SQLite support.
 .
 You can change this setting later on by running "dpkg-reconfigure -plow
 cinder".

Template: cinder/auth-host
Type: string
Default: 127.0.0.1
_Description: Authentication server hostname:
 Please specify the hostname of the authentication server. Typically
 this is also the hostname of the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).

Template: cinder/admin-tenant-name
Type: string
Default: admin
# Translators: a "tenant" in OpenStack world is
# an entity that contains one or more username/password couples. 
# It's typically the tenant that will be used for billing. Having more than one
# username/password is very helpful in larger organization.
# You're advised to either keep "tenant" without translating it
# or keep it aside with your translation. Example for French:
# propri?taire ("tenant")
_Description: Authentication server tenant name:
 Please specify the authentication server tenant name.

Template: cinder/admin-user
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Authentication server username:
 Please specify the username to use with the authentication server.

Template: cinder/admin-password
Type: password
_Description: Authentication server password:
 Please specify the password to use with the authentication server.

Template: cinder/volume_group
Type: string
_Description: Cinder volume group:
 Please specify the name of the LVM volume group on which Cinder
 will create partitions.
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# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: cinder/register-endpoint
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Register Cinder in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
 Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
 accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
 endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
 .
 Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
 connect using the Keystone authentication token.

Template: cinder/keystone-ip
Type: string
_Description: Keystone server IP address:
 Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that cinder-api can
 contact Keystone to do the Cinder service and endpoint creation.

Template: cinder/keystone-auth-token
Type: password
_Description: Keystone authentication token:
 To configure its endpoint in Keystone, cinder-api needs the Keystone
 authentication token.

Template: cinder/endpoint-ip
Type: string
_Description: Cinder endpoint IP address:
 Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Cinder.
 .
 This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
 service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
 IP address.

Template: cinder/region-name
Type: string
Default: regionOne
_Description: Name of the region to register:
 OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
 a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
 endpoint.
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Source: cinder
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: PKG OpenStack <openstack-devel at lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Loic Dachary (OuoU) <loic at debian.org>,
           Julien Danjou <acid at debian.org>,
           Thomas Goirand <zigo at debian.org>,
           Ghe Rivero <ghe.rivero at stackops.com>,
           Mehdi Abaakouk <sileht at sileht.net>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 8.0.0),
 po-debconf,
 python-all (>= 2.6.6-3~),
 openstack-pkg-tools
Build-Depends-Indep: pep8 (>= 1.3.3),
 pylint,
 python-amqplib,
 python-anyjson,
 python-argparse,
 python-babel,
 python-cheetah,
 python-coverage,
 python-daemon,
 python-eventlet (>= 0.9.17),
 python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.5.0),
 python-greenlet,
 python-hp3parclient,
 python-iso8601,
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.0),
 python-kombu,
 python-lockfile,
 python-lxml,
 python-migrate,
 python-mock,
 python-mox,
 python-mysqldb,
 python-netaddr,
 python-nose,
 python-oslo.config,
 python-paramiko,
 python-paste,
 python-pastedeploy,
 python-psycopg2,
 python-routes,
 python-rtslib,
 python-setuptools,
 python-setuptools-git,
 python-sphinx,
 python-sqlalchemy,
 python-stevedore (>= 0.7),
 python-suds,
 python-swiftclient,
 python-webob (>= 1.2.3),
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=openstack/cinder.git;a=summary
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/openstack/cinder.git
Homepage: http://cinder.openstack.org/

Package: python-cinder
Section: python
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${python:Depends},
 python-amqplib,
 python-anyjson,
 python-argparse,
 python-babel,
 python-cheetah,
 python-daemon,
 python-eventlet (>= 0.9.17),
 python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.5.0),
 python-greenlet,
 python-iso8601,
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.0),
 python-kombu,
 python-lockfile,
 python-lxml,
 python-migrate,
 python-mysqldb,
 python-netaddr,
 python-oslo.config,
 python-paramiko,
 python-paste,
 python-pastedeploy,
 python-routes,
 python-rtslib,
 python-sqlalchemy,
 python-stevedore (>= 0.7),
 python-suds,
 python-swiftclient,
 python-webob (>= 1.2.3),
 ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack block storage system - Python libraries
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains the Python libraries that are part of Cinder.

Package: cinder-common
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends:
 adduser,
 python-cinder (= ${binary:Version}),
 debconf,
 dbconfig-common,
 ${misc:Depends},
 ${python:Depends}
Provides: ${python:Provides}
Description: OpenStack block storage system - common files
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains common files and configuration that are
 needed by all the daemon packages of Cinder.

Package: cinder-api
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: adduser, ${ostack-lsb-base}, debconf, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, python-keystoneclient
Description: OpenStack block storage system - API server
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains the API server on which clients will connect.

Package: cinder-volume
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends:
 adduser,
 ${ostack-lsb-base},
 cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}),
 lvm2,
 tgt,
 qemu-utils,
 ${misc:Depends},
 ${python:Depends}
Suggests: ceph-common
Description: OpenStack block storage system - Volume server
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains the Volume server which will actually do the storage.

Package: cinder-scheduler
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack block storage system - Scheduler server
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains the Scheduler server.

Package: cinder-backup
Architecture: all
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: adduser, ${ostack-lsb-base}, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}
Description: OpenStack block storage system - Backup server
 Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
 computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
 directly replaces.
 .
 Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
 permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
 .
 This package contains the Cinder backup service.
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--- cinder.old/debian/cinder-common.templates	2013-05-17 10:01:17.385948883 +0200
+++ cinder/debian/cinder-common.templates	2013-06-15 08:51:14.004435373 +0200
@@ -1,7 +1,16 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: cinder/start_services
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Start cinder services at boot?
+_Description: Start Cinder services at boot?
  Please choose whether you want to start Cinder services when the
  machine is booted up.
 
@@ -9,44 +18,53 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Set up a database for Cinder?
- No database has been set up for Cinder to use. If you want
- to set one up now, please make sure you have all needed
- information:
+ No database has been set up for Cinder to use. Before
+ continuing, you should make sure you have the following information:
  .
-  * the host name of the database server (which must allow TCP
-    connections from this machine);
-  * a username and password to access the database;
-  * the type of database management software you want to use.
+  * the type of database that you want to use;
+  * the database server hostname (that server must allow TCP connections from this
+    machine);
+  * a username and password to access the database.
  .
- If you don't choose this option, no database will be set up and Cinder
- will use regular SQLite support.
+ If some of these requirements are missing, do not choose this option and run with
+ regular SQLite support.
  .
- You can change this setting later on by running "dpkg-reconfigure
- -plow cinder-common".
+ You can change this setting later on by running "dpkg-reconfigure -plow
+ cinder".
 
 Template: cinder/auth-host
 Type: string
 Default: 127.0.0.1
-_Description: Auth server hostname:
- Please specify the URL of your Cinder authentication server. Typically 
- this is also the URL of your OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).
+_Description: Authentication server hostname:
+ Please specify the hostname of the authentication server. Typically
+ this is also the hostname of the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).
 
 Template: cinder/admin-tenant-name
 Type: string
 Default: admin
-_Description: Auth server tenant name:
+# Translators: a "tenant" in OpenStack world is
+# an entity that contains one or more username/password couples. 
+# It's typically the tenant that will be used for billing. Having more than one
+# username/password is very helpful in larger organization.
+# You're advised to either keep "tenant" without translating it
+# or keep it aside with your translation. Example for French:
+# propri?taire ("tenant")
+_Description: Authentication server tenant name:
+ Please specify the authentication server tenant name.
 
 Template: cinder/admin-user
 Type: string
 Default: admin
-_Description: Auth server username:
+_Description: Authentication server username:
+ Please specify the username to use with the authentication server.
 
 Template: cinder/admin-password
 Type: password
-_Description: Auth server password:
+_Description: Authentication server password:
+ Please specify the password to use with the authentication server.
 
 Template: cinder/volume_group
 Type: string
 _Description: Cinder volume group:
- Please specify the name of the LVM volume group (vg) on which Cinder
+ Please specify the name of the LVM volume group on which Cinder
  will create partitions.
--- cinder.old/debian/cinder-api.templates	2013-05-17 10:01:17.385948883 +0200
+++ cinder/debian/cinder-api.templates	2013-06-15 08:51:15.808484356 +0200
@@ -1,31 +1,39 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-english at lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: cinder/register-endpoint
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Register Cinder in the keystone endpoint catalog?
- Each Openstack services (each API) should be registered in order to be
+_Description: Register Cinder in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
+ Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
  accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
- endpoint-create". Select if you want to run these commands now.
+ endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
  .
- Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to
- connect using the Keystone auth token.
+ Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
+ connect using the Keystone authentication token.
 
 Template: cinder/keystone-ip
 Type: string
-_Description: Keystone IP address:
- Enter the IP address of your keystone server, so that cinder-api can
+_Description: Keystone server IP address:
+ Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that cinder-api can
  contact Keystone to do the Cinder service and endpoint creation.
 
 Template: cinder/keystone-auth-token
 Type: password
-_Description: Keystone Auth Token:
- To configure its endpoint in Keystone, cinder-api needs the Keystone auth
- token.
+_Description: Keystone authentication token:
+ To configure its endpoint in Keystone, cinder-api needs the Keystone
+ authentication token.
 
 Template: cinder/endpoint-ip
 Type: string
 _Description: Cinder endpoint IP address:
- Enter the IP address that will be used to contact Cinder (eg: the Cinder
- endpoint IP address).
+ Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Cinder.
  .
  This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
  service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
@@ -35,6 +43,6 @@
 Type: string
 Default: regionOne
 _Description: Name of the region to register:
- Openstack can be used using availability zones, with each region representing
+ OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
  a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
  endpoint.
--- cinder.old/debian/control	2013-05-17 10:01:17.385948883 +0200
+++ cinder/debian/control	2013-06-02 10:04:06.276209108 +0200
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@
  python-webob (>= 1.2.3),
  ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - Python libraries
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
- This package contains the Python libraries that are parts of Cinder.
+ This package contains the Python libraries that are part of Cinder.
 
 Package: cinder-common
 Architecture: all
@@ -111,11 +111,11 @@
  ${python:Depends}
 Provides: ${python:Provides}
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - common files
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
  This package contains common files and configuration that are
@@ -126,14 +126,14 @@
 Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
 Depends: adduser, ${ostack-lsb-base}, debconf, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, python-keystoneclient
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - API server
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
- This package contains the API server on which client will connect.
+ This package contains the API server on which clients will connect.
 
 Package: cinder-volume
 Architecture: all
@@ -149,11 +149,11 @@
  ${python:Depends}
 Suggests: ceph-common
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - Volume server
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
  This package contains the Volume server which will actually do the storage.
@@ -163,11 +163,11 @@
 Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
 Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - Scheduler server
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
  This package contains the Scheduler server.
@@ -177,11 +177,11 @@
 Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
 Depends: adduser, ${ostack-lsb-base}, cinder-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}, ${python:Depends}
 Description: OpenStack block storage system - Backup server
- Cinder is a block storage as service system for the Openstack cloud computing
- suite. It re-implements the features of nova-volume, which it directly
- replaces.
+ Cinder is a block Storage-as-a-Service system for the OpenStack cloud
+ computing suite. It re-implements the features of Nova-volume, which it
+ directly replaces.
  .
- Cinder use LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
+ Cinder uses LVM partitions of your volume servers in order to provide iSCSI
  permanent block storage devices for your virtual machines running on Nova.
  .
  This package contains the Cinder backup service.
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