r368 - branches/rewrite/debian

[Vagrant Cascadian]

Author: vagrant-guest
Date: Tue Nov 23 21:59:35 2004
New Revision: 368

Modified:
   branches/rewrite/debian/manpage.sgml
Log:
minor english rewording.


Modified: branches/rewrite/debian/manpage.sgml
==============================================================================
--- branches/rewrite/debian/manpage.sgml	(original)
+++ branches/rewrite/debian/manpage.sgml	Tue Nov 23 21:59:35 2004
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
   <refnamediv>
     <refname>&dhpackage;</refname>
 
-    <refpurpose>debpartial-mirror is a program to generate Debian partial mirrors.</refpurpose>
+    <refpurpose>debpartial-mirror is a program to generate partial Debian mirrors.</refpurpose>
   </refnamediv>
   <refsect1>
     <title>DESCRIPTION</title>
@@ -65,13 +65,13 @@
     <para>This manual page documents briefly the
       <command>&dhpackage;</command> command.</para>
 
-    <para><command>&dhpackage;</command> is a program for generate a Debian partial mirror</para>
+    <para><command>&dhpackage;</command> is a program to generate partial Debian mirrors</para>
 
   </refsect1>
   <refsect1>
     <title>OPTIONS</title>
 
-    <para>These programs follow the usual &gnu; command line syntax,
+    <para>This program follows the usual &gnu; command line syntax,
       with long options starting with two dashes (`-').  A summary of
       options is included below.</para>
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
           <option>--skip-files</option>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Skip the files of downloading.</para>
+          <para>Skip downloading of files.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
           <option>--skip-packages</option>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Skip the packages of downloading.</para>
+          <para>Skip downloading of packages.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>